schedule
December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love this. I can't wait for you to update this.
schedule
December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i just love how this written. its good! please continue quickly!!
schedule
December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is good but what's with all the '??' at the start of each paragraph...it's very annoying formating you've got here...I suggest getting rid of it tout suite...that's French for 'right now'...
anyway...I'll keep reading...on to chapter 2
kiki
anyway...I'll keep reading...on to chapter 2
kiki
schedule
December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok chapter 3 has not '??' I'm glad...and the story is developing nicely too ...can't wait for the next update!!
kiki
kiki