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dat was hot cant wait to read more and yes it was to my liking. about time archer got wat was coming to him. i knew it would be coming soon and i luved it (am i bad for that :( )ed it crazy exposing himself like that lol. i hope scar helps al i dont want him to go bye bye either. update soon and i will be back to read soon k XD.

whooo! showodwn in lior and icant wait to read it. damn those homunculi and their scheming ways...ed you need to get outta there buddy and soon. al kick kimblee's ass for me. XD update soon. and great job

Yay, a new chapter! You must write constantly to keep up. I actually forgot Wrath was on tehir side for a second *L* I feel a bit bad for Scar, he's gotta be confused about babies.

Actually, queen in French is spelled reine not raine. But, whatever, no biggie. It's your story so call her whatever you want! :) The petname of baby is a little condescending/annoying. That could really old really quick. She doesn't even really know Ed and yet she's feeling on his stomach, calling him baby, and all but steamrolling her way into his life. Since she's Roy's sister Ed has no choice but to put up with her. *sigh* I'm glad it's him and not me. pushy relatives. ugh. Don'cha just hate 'em? But, enough of me ranting about my own personal hells, I can't wait for the babies to arrive!! :D yay! Not much longer now! happiness!! One thing I must compliment you on is how realistic you've made this out to be. Ed only strays into OOC-ness when he's being hormonal but that's to be expected. It's all completely believeable and I'm loving every minute of it!! :D
Koneko =^.^=

OMG!!! Where to begin? Oh! So much is going on!! so exciting!! Ooh! Roy's proposal had me in tears - tears of joy that Roy actually proposed and tears of laughter at the banter between Roy and Ed! "You really want to marry me one day?" "No, I won these in a box of candy, and I thought they’d make a nice gift." *dies laughing* Love it!! :D Roy wasn't the only one who felt sick to their stomach when everyone was ordered to Lior. Oh Jesus! The thought of Ed in that terrible place in his condition scares me senseless! *shivers* I'm kinda glad that Raine is with Ed in Lior. At least he has a medical professional there in case he needs one. That magical (alchemic?) defensive flare that Ed did was awesome! I think the babies were defending their daddy (and themselves!) from Scar. If so, it's like someone (I forget who. Hohenheim maybe.) said, they are going to be truly awesome alchemists. :) Oh! Lyra seems to be taking a very scary interest in little Aideen! No! Ah! You're scaring the daylights out of me! I've been as nervous as a long-tailed cat in a room full of rocking chairs over these babies since the beginning. I couldn't bear it if anything happens them! *cries* Ed? A martyr for the state?!? Oh say it's not so! *hides under desk* :P This is getting SO good! I can't wait to read more! *bounces in chair with excitement* Oh, random thought, is Havoc trying to hook up with Gracia? It certainly seems like he's got a thing for her! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. Please tell me that these accursed homunculi will be destroyed soon. They all scare the living daylights out of me! @_@

I don't think I've reviewed before but I really love this story. It's the only reason I check the FMA section every day, sometimes several times. And I haven't anything that I hate about this story, not even the original character. And I REALLY hate original characters but they're almost always Mary Sue's. But anyways, I wanted to ask, is Dante looking at Ed's daughter as a possible host? I noticed her special interest. And the daughter being Ed's and Roy's, coming down from Hohenheim, seems like she (and the boy of course) could be something special. If that's what she's thinking then that's something they'd have to worry about unless they get rid of her. I don't envy them at all, though hopefully things will be getting better for them once Dante and the homunculi are gone and the babies are born.

Right now I am quite curious as to how you will finish the Scar arc (and I admit he is one of my favorite tragic villains ever) and everything. ^_^

Man, Archer is such an ass! I do like that their hatred of each other is out in the open though. Poor Ed though, I really feel for him. Am wondering how this whole thing is going to mesh with the remaining plot of the series...kind of worried about that...

That Archer....evil evil man. Nice way you told their history and first time, I was kinda wondering how the hell they ended up in bed together in the first place. Aww Ed, a little jealous is he now. Well, that is understandable. I'd be too if I had a fiancée as hot as the Colonel. Still can't believe they are engaged! Wooohooo! Oh, I'm afreid of what would happen if Archer found out 'she is a 'he' and the 'he' is Ed! I felt a hint of jealousy comming from Archer as well.
And yay for Havoc for quitting smoking!

omg, this just keeps getting better and better. though i may hate frank with the burning intensity of a thousand suns (the only character i hate more is orochimaru), i really like this story!! i look forward to your next update!!