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again luv this story luvd this chapter so update soon.

Ok. Wrath scares the living daylights out of me. He always has, he always will. Only Envy disturbes me more than Wrath does. I don't know what it is but I just never liked him. I know you said in here somewhere that you liked Wrath and I hope you mean the Wrath you've written and not the canon one. (This is one of the problems of going back into a story after you've read pretty far into and trying to leave reviews. Bits and parts of chapters mix and meld and I can never remember where or when I read something. *sigh* You'd think I'd learn to leave reviews when I'm supposed to to prevent this sort of thing. Oh well.) Speaking of canon, how do you intend for this to end? (Jeez that's kinda harsh!) I mean, we all know that the canon ended pretty tragically with Ed on the other side of the gate. Just how more much of the canon will come into play before this AU (for lack of a better term) of yours takes over and goes on to tell the tale? Please don't think I'm complaining! I'm really not. I so want there to be a happy ending for Roy and Ed. I'm just afraid that it won't happen if too much more of the canon is utilized. I know you can't ignore the events in the anime because you want to maintain a sense of reality and timeline but, *sigh*, I can't explain this well enough. Do you even get a sense of where I'm trying to go with this? probably not. I guess in my own incoherent way I'm hoping that you will try to avoid all the tragedy that was the end of the anime. *rueful smile* Is it really too much to all but demand a happy ending for our (OK, my) favorite yaoi couple? :)
Koneko =^.^=

Archer. yech. The sooner he's gone the better! I gotta hand it to ya tho that a Mustang/Archer pairing is one that I have never seen anywhere else. Your creativity (and ability to really gross me out!) knows no bounds! LOL! Al's little stray calico was a nice touch! so cute! I'm saying this as my own calico is giving me little annoyed looks that seem to say, "How about leaving that keyboard alone and feed me?" Cats, gotta love 'em! :D (Could this review have been more random? It's been one of those days.)
Koneko =^.^=

Ah! Now these names for the babies I like! I should thank Al for suggesting that Maes and Riza be middle names instead of firsts! Smart boy! :D I'd have loved it if, when Archer threatened to backhand Ed, Roy had set him ablaze! *evil grin* Sure there would be all kinds of repercussions for Roy but at least I'd have gotten my jollies! *evil laughter*
Koneko =^.^=

Oh.My.God. This is so amazing! This is without a doubt the most believable and realistic mpreg story I have ever read! wow! To be honest with you, I started reading this a couple of days ago and got so into it I didn't want to stop long enough to leave reviews! I know, I know. Bad me. :P It was just so good!! What drew me to this story in the first place with the fact that the words "her" and "him" were in the title of a yaoi story. Having "her" and "him" in the title more suggested a hentai story than a yaoi one. So, curiousity piqued, I began to read and I am so glad I did! :D Love it! One of the best things about coming in late to a story like this is that the cliffhangers aren't so brutal. This way, all I have to do is click to the next chapter and then I can breathe again! LOL! I hope Ed will be OK and carry to term. Given all that his body is going thru and the fact that this is a twin pregnancy, I wouldn't be surprised if he delivered early. That would stress poor Colonel Bastard *giggle* even more than he already is! :D
Can't wait to read more!!
Koneko =^.^=

Sqwee! The first hints of attraction between the two - Roy being so protective of Ed and eyeing him like that before giving him the injection - finally show themselves! :D sweet! Izumi is scary! eep! What was Ed thinking just blurting out "He knocked me up" like that! LOL! Izumi's furious enough as it is! Don't make her even more angry! :D I just love how you've kept each character in character - especially Ed's temper concerning his height! Love those snappy comebacks of his!!
Koneko =^.^=

I'm not sure if I should feel sorry for Roy for getting pummeled by Sig like that or if I should beat him half to death myself for acting that way towards Ed. Sig needs to control that temper (not to mention the use of those enormous hands of his! yikes! The butcher almost made hamburger out of him! Get it? butcher? hamburger? *crickets chirp* Ok, no more bad jokes. :P) but Colonel Bastard deserves to suffer a bit of pain for treating Ed like a thing to be used and gotten rid of when of no more use. I wonder if real-life surrogate mothers go thru the same thing.
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. Aren't you glad you got me, a new reader, into your story now? I can leave you a whole bunch of reviews all at once! How's that for an ego boost! :D

Ok, this is the one moment I had in mind when I said that cliffhangers wouldn't be so horrific since the next chapters and the rest of the story was only a click away. major panic moment! I was so afraid Ed had lost the babies I couldn't hit the 'next chapter' thingy fast enough!! I know you've heard this before but I don't like Maes and Riza for the babies' names either. There's just something wrong with using those names. I don't know what it is but it just doesn't feel right. Still lovin' the bickering going on between Ed and Roy tho! "(Dr Knox) told me a lot of the things to expect between the hormones and pregnancy. One was mood swings." "You were born with those." "Bite me, Colonel Bastard." Love it!! increased sex drive. eight times in three days. Ed! Good grief! LOL! Somebody's been a busy boy!! :D
Koneko =^.^=

I knew I liked Roy for some reason! He can be so sweet - when he wants to be! :) I go back and forth between just loving him to pieces and wanting to beat the hell out of him. Why is there rarely (if ever) any middle ground with him? ;) I've been wondering all along how Ed was going to have the babies. I guess a possibility just presented itself! :) I know Ed wants a cesarean but he'll be S.O.L. if the babies come early and/or he's not near Dr Knox when they do come. Can he really have them naturally? It makes me kinda anxious just thinking about it! Will Ed keep his new parts after the babies are born? The uterus and vagina were alchemically created and enhanced and made to stay with hormones and Ed doesn't have anything to trade to get rid of them and get his appendix and pancreas back. I'm guessing he won't get them back and the other parts will just reabsorb. I'm hoping for his sake that once the female hormones stop his natural male ones take over and he'll go back to being himself. (I ask a lot of questions don't I? pesky me! :D) This may be a dumb thing to say but it took me until about this point in the story (maybe it was last chapter, can't remember) to fully understand what "For Her. For Him." actually meant. Ed is doing all this for Riza (her) and Roy (him)! Gah! I am such a dork! *sigh* Koneko no baka!! :)
More reviews later after I get some sleep. *yawn* L8r!
Koneko =^.^=

Plot, plot, yay! Not that there isnt' always plot, but it's moving faster now. Looking good!