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luvd it update soon. damn our guys just cant get a break. hope ed doesnt have the babies yet or get found out thats the last thing they need at the moment. :D

awww that was so sweet. i hope everything turns out great. anyway, you are doing a great job with this story and i cant wait for the next chapter to come along! >< you've sucked me into reading this and i am trying to be patient with the updates. *shakes in her seat*

OMGOMGOMGOMG...T.T WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! YOU MUST UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!! I REALLY LIKE THIS SIERIES AND REEEAAALLLYYY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!

Oooh, I like how terrified Roy is about the fact that they can't hide this any more. Perhaps Ed will ship out with them and then be hidden somewhere?

Also, the birthday party was adorable. And I rather like Roy's sister, although it's odd she was estranged for so long.

Yay! I'm 200! Haha!
This was one of the best chapters ever! A gasp escaped my mouth when Roy asked Ed to marry him. I was like Oh My God!
It was so nic to see Roy get along with his sister. And the ending....oh this is bad, very bad! What will happen to our little Ed?!
Just so you know, I am one of those who sooo wants you to continue. You get to hear this a lot but I AM a very devoted fan and I love your story! L-O-V-E it!

oh my freakin' gorsh!! that sucks to the nth power!! but it makes for such good reading!! of course, we all know that at this point in canon scar was less set on killing ed than making the philosopher's stone, so my main concern is archer. boo, hiss, hiss! and the way he tensed when roy said he was getting married... what? did he seriously think he stood a chance with roy? puhlease. great chapter!! please update sooooooooon!!!

damn those military dogs! especially archer. what will roy do? i really hope he doesnt allow ed to go. and aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww roy proposed to ed that was too cute. im happy for them, they finally have a family. yay XD. cant wait to read more update soon

W00t! I can review again! (i have no account... cause i don't write.... i AM of age though!!)

Lot's a twists and turns. I just LOVE Roy's sister too! She's very lively, and a great addition to the cast in my eyes. I'm also a big fan of Marta, i'm glad you've keot her around so far.

heheh! The plot thickens! How will Ed and Mustang weasel themselves outta the problems with Liore... though i've got a feeling they won't be able too. OInce again, i'd like to mention that i love how you're incorperating the events of the series in your own way. Brillant. Looking foward to more!

:) I am so amused by Roy having a mean big sister, I'm not sure what to think. However, it's interesting how quickly she's adjusted. I'm wondering if her sarcasm is a cover for her concern? She obviously must care about him somewhat if she's come all this way to see the new children...

OMG! OMG! OMG! Where to start? Ok, I LoVe the chapter. And Raine is such a good idea, can't wait to see what you are planning to do with her. hehe, Roy having a sister....*I have a surprise for you*.....Finakt some loving at home, and Roy is such a sweet guy, understanding what poor Ed is going through. And I do feel bad for Havoc, poor guy, always in Roy's shadow. You jumped one month ahead nicely, explaining wht has happened in the time. Luv ya story!