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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
there were so many times i just stopped and went, "awwww." this was a great chapter, and i love roy's sister!! maybe we'll get to see babies next? or maybe even some danger, like say, envy finding out his little brother is about to have children? oooo, that would be so... nerve wracking. i wouldn't be able to sleep. don't do it!!
anyway, keep up the great work!!
anyway, keep up the great work!!
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ed, so heavy. And theguys are gonna die once he hears about them taking Al to a bar.
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
again great chapter. i liked the fact u introduced us to mustang's sister. i can tell things are getting to pretty crazy now since she's there and with the babies due soon ed may go insane lol. update soon and great job keep it up XD
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay the home streach!! keep it up XD
kiki
kiki
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cringe* well, that sounds ugly. Excellent chapter, though.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Ed's all: He’d gotten laid, he's the king of the world! Hahaha, all guys are like that. I liked the way Roy interrogated Hohemheim, very profesional. Monster is the perfect word for ll of this, and poor Ed thought he was a monster aswell. And when they all wanted to comfort him, it was so cute and heart-moving.
Ouh yeah, thanks for the shower ;) we will be seeing that soon in Flame and Fullmetal 300km/h. Hehe. Just so you know, it was you who inspired me to write yaoi-fics and post them here. Thank you! Luv
Ouh yeah, thanks for the shower ;) we will be seeing that soon in Flame and Fullmetal 300km/h. Hehe. Just so you know, it was you who inspired me to write yaoi-fics and post them here. Thank you! Luv
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! i love how this is coming out! great way to move the story right along...still waiting for those precious babies to come! keep it up!
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh hurray! 29 was cut off, I was wondering about that. And this - I really like the idea of Hohenheim having to analyze his children in photographs, because he didn't stay long enough to learn what they were like. And Ed being so elated at having finally gotten laid...and Hohenheim's observation of the power Roy's children are going to inherit...I do hope Ed gets to be angry at his father for a while, that would be good. But right now it is good that everyone loves him and Al very much.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I can review again! -she's so happy- Anyway, love this one, especially the end with Hohenheim and the moster deal. Great analogy (though it's true). Glad you updated!... What IS Envy's real name, I always thought it was Hoju... Wasn't it? Well, doesn't really matter, ot a lot of people know. Anyway, wonderful chapter, hope you update soon and fast, all that good jazz.
-Kitten
P.S. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! :3
-Kitten
P.S. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! :3
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW!!! YAY! love it! and I like the getting Marta to help keep him focused thing. ;) so great! update soon, ok? ^-^