rate_review Reviews

I just love the morning after parts. They are either lovely or then something bad happens. But Ed and Roy love each other so....awww...anyway, I was just wondering, the story won't end when the twins are born, right? Or maybe there will be a sequel :D It's just so fun thinking of how Roy and Ed are going to handle being parents with two babies to take care of!
I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter :)

I still love this chapter! oh ouh, hmmm, I was going to use Ed touching himself in the shower too in a chapter of the AU fic, I may have to think that over. Don't want anybody to think I'm stealing your ideas :P But hey, I can think of many that would like to take the credit of such a wonderful fic as For her. For him.
Keep it up hun

wow! this was the best chapter (chapter 30)yet!! I loved the conversation between Roy and Hohenheim, very well done!! lots of information conveyed while in character, good job!!

kiki

what a wonderful two chapters. but i just can't wait for those babies to come out!! keep it coming!!

luv it update soon. see im not gonna go on a rant like last time. just simple and to the point XD

*fangirl shreik* well done! update soon please! love it! LOOOVVVEEE IITT!!

YEY! there is nothing better than leaving for two weeks and having a bazillion chapters of this awesome story waiting for me to read and love them! Once again im totally in love with this story! and pregnant!ed is just so freaking awesome! i love everything so far, and im so proud of roy to have some straight out to the *remaining* rockbells and hohenheim deserved to be shell shocked from all the info.. **mutters..crazy bastard* cannot wait for new chapters! oh and have you thought about posting this on livejournal?

Fun story, though do you mind if I point out a few things?
You have a bad habit of switching speakers mid-paragraph. You need to start a new one each and every time. It keeps the readers from being confused.
There was what I would call OOC in this chapter- I don't think Ed OR Roy would ever call out to any kind of god or gods, in the middle of sex or otherwise. Both are athiests. In the anime, Pinako seemed more willing to defend Mustang but that could be because she didn't know who killed her son and daughter in law, and Winry was the one ambivalent about forgiveness.
Al... well, I have no idea how Al would act. I think he would tend to be more accepting, but that's personal interpretation.
That's all I could find. ^_^

Eck, getting up all night sucks, even more when it's not you and they jostle you on the way by. And yay, Roy gets to do the parent talk thingy, even if he means to confront him on other things.

awwww this was a short chapter *pouts* but i still liked it. i wonder if roy has any more plans for our fullmetal *wink wink* but anyway. i want to know wat will happen when roy and hohenheim finally talk. and wat ever happened to envy and the gang. must have more story....good job though...i luv ur fics esp. the sesshy/miroku one. btw when u gonna update that...dont leave me hanging lol. ok i'll stop ranting now...peace