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Bout halfway down, Roy crawls on Roy. *L* Otherwise, looks good, a sweet first time, lots of love.

Wow! That was sooo good! I liked the first version of the former chapter but I have to admit this one is better somehow. Hehe, the boys finaly got to it! And Roy was so nice and good and loving to Ed! Awww. Damnit it I was a guy I'd let Roy be my first any night ;)
It will be fun to see if Ed will have that 'I had sex for the first time' kind of glow.
I really admire you, not understanding how you find the time! But you do and that makes me soo happy!

all i have to say it about freakin' time we got a lemon. lol. nah but for real i luved the last couple of chapters, esp. when ed gave his father something to remember him by (what a hit!) can't wait to see what happens next. all i have to say is i luv this fic XD

WOW
That was so hot! I think that was the best preggy sex I've ever read.
A forgiving not voilent Winry, understanding Pinako, What your intentions Al and a shocked Hol. was awesome.

okay, i read this last night, but i was too tired to review, but i loved this chapter. i would have thought ed, being nervous, would have reminded roy not to use the wrong hole, but it's a negligent detail that really doesn't need to be there. again, i thought you did very well describing ed's first time, and lord knows it's going to be better for him once the kids are born, ne? looking forward to the next chapter!!

Damn, that was good, son!!! I was waiting for that moment! It was worth the wait. Ed and Roy are starting something special, that makes me happy after all the crap Ed has to go through. Can't wait till the babies are born! Anyway good job. Update soon.

Well, this is a rather interesting story so far. I’m not really an mpreg fan, but I saw your story many times and finally the summary moved from the “Hm, sounds kinda interesting” place, to the “Maybe I’ll read that someday” place, to the “what the hell, I’ll check it out” place. I’ll admit I didn’t read it in one sitting (as I rarely really read other people’s work anymore), but I’m definitely glad I took the time to read it.

I was sad about Riza’s death, as she’s one of my favorite female anime characters of all time, but I thought it was a great plot device. I’m glad you didn’t have Ed and Roy just all of a sudden start dancing in the sheets. I think it’s great when authors focus on character development. There’s such a difference between just throwing lemons in there and using them to enhance the story. I really think you’ve done that, so good job.

Another thing I really like is the fact that it isn’t some separate story, but runs parallel to the happenings in the series; going as if this is what would happen if...

On another note, I think that Maes and Riza were fine names for the child, I also think they work well as middle names. I think what you ended up with was fine too. *shrugs* I mean, you’re the author.

Good job with keeping up with this story. I think it will be interesting to see how you continue this story and bring it to a close.

- Z

Yes, Yes, YES! I've become to like night life. At the end of a hard day you save me with Preggy Ed, emo Roy, Protective little brother Al, and frogiving Wrinry and Pinko.
Then you through in Ed kicking his dead beat fathers ass. yes all is good with the world. Now through in some lemons and we can all have some pie for dessert.
This was a good week thank you.
P.S.
Fat suit Ed is just something I picture when I boss is ranting or when my teacher is boring Just to funny. Little Fat Ed kicking Greed's ass is just to funny to be sad sorry that is just horroriable because you were trying to have this serious moment and I just could stop laughing. It did hit later when Roy was being a comforty for Ed.

This chapter seemed a bit rushed, but was very good nonetheless. Everyone seemed a little bit too understanding, IMO. (I would be all like O_O No Way!!!, but that's me.. hehe!!)

^__^ Luv it and can't wait for more!! :D

Aw, I am SO glad they came out to Winry about this whole mess. Though I don't know, Winry's information dump at the end seemed a little sudden. I like Ed apologizing to Al about not rushing in head first after him too, that was lovely. And also, I'm probably crazy, but I think Ed is still hot even when pregnant XD;