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OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! Three times my jaw fell down, 1. Al got to know about Ed and Roy, that was almost scary!
2. Their father is back....not good, hope Ed doesn't miscarry because of it. And then when Roy told the Rockbell's he killed Winry's parents. *sniff* Honesty, I couldn't have come up with a better way! Winry was mad but forgave Roy....awww *sniff*

so many things going on!! this was an awesome chapter. as for wrath... i have no idea what you can do with him either. unless you want him to die, like in the movie (and if you haven't seen the movie and i just spoiled it for you, i'm so sorry). or you could just have him realize that as a human, he'd be weaker than he is currently. anyway, again, nice chapter, i look forward to the next one!!

Poor Roy, killing himself over something that was already forgiven. I totally forgot about Hohenheim, I always seem to miss him somehow. Sneaky.

i am satisfied with how this was resolved. j/k i loved that they kinda made up. i also love how wrath is playing for both teams (in the non-sexual sort of way) i can't wait for the next chapter!! (i say that way too often...)

awe the end of this chapter, yeah for fluff ^_^ I really like that you are still sort of following what happens in the show, but if you do will Ed still end up in Germany in the end like the show? Also because I am completely useless at remembering if you said it how many months pregnant is he supposed to be at this point?
I really can't wait for your next update, I'll be checking ever day!
Great work!

wow! I could kiss you with the way the brought them back togethere and you didn't make them stay seprated for 3or 4 chapters yes. I'm so happy I think I told you before how I love how you are keeping and yet not to the anime story line.I love your wrath and and just everything about this chapter was gggrrrrrreat! Ok I need sleep but I had to stay up to read this.
Oh and you say your not good with the sex sceens but I love that they are not romance novel blah they are real and you put alot of what they are thinking or at least Ed and they may be a little undetailed but so hot and I can feel the love and that I think is the most important thing.
Thanks again.

OMG!! I AM SO IN LUV WITH THIS FIC!!! I EVEN GO BACK TO REREAD IT JUST SO! I CAN HONESTLY SAY I HAVE READ IT LIKE 5 TIMES! NO LIES! I LUV IT! WHEN I GO ON HERE UR THE FIRST I CHECK TO SEE IF IT WAS UPDATED!! I LUV IT! IT HAS EVERYTHING TO KEEP IT GOOD! KEEP IT UP! UR BIGGEST FICFAN!^^

Poor Greed. Wrath is such a sneaky little guy. It's too early to think of anything intelligent to say other than excellent job.

AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWW! *sniff* *still mad at Ed for going out on his own and Roy or drinking* but they made up and finaly a cute 'I love you' *cheers* I like the way Wrath is, calling Izumi his mother like he should and helping Roy to save Ed. No...I love the way Wrath is, he is such a cutie <3
Can't wait to see what kind of danger or problems our boys have to face before the biggest one when the twins are born. ;) Nice

Amazing work, i can't wait for the next chapter and for the babies to be born ^_^