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Hey, It's E.

Love this chapter. -Sorry about the spelling in this, the room is spinning and I don't know why.-

Enough of my health.

I like the role you have given Wrath and the ending was sweet to this one. Can't wait for the next update!

i still am anxious to see how this turns out i check every night to see if its been updated

ok so chapter 26...you've lost me here I'm afraid...why does Ed have to kill alchemists? or do you mean Holmculi (sp?) I don't get it very well...??

I love how resourceful Ed is. Seriously. Creating a "fat suit" to hide his obvious strange body type, sneaking out to kick some ass - that's definitely Ed. I was a bit worried when he didn't immediately rush off to save Al earlier, truth be told...but now that he has I am so very very happy. And hopefully Roy's learned a lesson too!

...never let Elrics have free reign XD

Also, apropos of nothing, I hate AFFN's new log in policies.

You almost stopped my heart with Artcher showing up. You had some hot shit going on with Roy and Ed too so unfair.
He is such a sleaze kissing Roy yuck! what present too only a sick fuck would do that. I want to see bad, bad things happen to that man.
I loved your Roy/Ed makeout with Ed's resistance because he feels fat and I love Roy answer of Don't care it just seemed to fit like he wanted to comfort Ed but only could manage the basics a frazes to do so. I love how embarrised Ed got at the end. Poor Ed not only a teenage boy but unexperienced too. Well I'm sure Roy can help with that.
Pregent Oral sex was just awesome and Ed taking the moment in hand and give as good as he gets was just love. It was so realistic how ed couldn't lay on his back I remember that very well from my own prepy days. I laughed out loud when Ed asked the doctor about sex. Oh I thanks I'm a little embarrised about how I though Ed was going to give birth. I think this is the first time I read where he grew a hole, but I think that makes just as much sense after all he grew a womb so why not.
Then when Roy told him about the Rockbells and then Ed's reaction to what Roy said was just so moodsingy. I'm yeah I can see where he would be upset. I loved it and I'm worried is Ed going to leave after everthing else after forgiving him for killing the Rockbells. I hope Roy does something to stop him.
can't wait for more.

omg, that was so wrong. but so good. oh man, why is it i can write the stuff but i can't read it? i need fluff!! well, i mean, i love angst, but only if there's fluff in the end, which i'm sure you'll deliver, so i'll just get over it. great chapter. keep up the great work.

yay, they fixed it much more nicely (the reviewing button) As to the chapter, which is what you're actually interested in, I always check in the monings, just in case you updated! ROy definately could have handled that better; telling someone you didn't tell them something because you wanted somehting isn't really a good thing. How far along is Ed by now? Too far to running around by himself, certainly.

Nice, it was about time they got into a fight. But WHY GOD WHY is Roy so stupid to reach for the bottle?!?!
Hmm, a pregnant Ed walking arund on his own...I will have to read cause I can't imagine such!!!
BTW, thanks for the review and the criticism. I trust you know how hard it is with a new computer...
You're doing great! Keep it up but don't exhaust yourself okey ;)
And maybe I will update soon if more people review ;)

This is the most excellent story of royxed i have read in a while.
I created an account just so i could tell you how much I love this story.
Please keep up the good work. This is the first place I look when I come online just to see if you have updated.
Also how much more angst, can't take the heartbreak (lol).
Thank you for a truly good yaoi story.

whoa, whoa, whoa!!! where does Ed think he's going!! *taps foot* Listen your in no condition to go running off mister!!! XD

love it! keep it up XD

kiki