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yay!! new chapter!! and it was so good. i really liked the graveyard scene. very moving. now, is dante really dead or is that a ruse? man, i can't wait for the update!!

Ehehe, did you know you have Logged In Reviews Only turned on? Not that I mind logging in to review this fic! I really, really, really enjoyed the hotness of the morning blow job scene (though I'm slightly confused about how that worked out - were they in 69 position? how was Ed still hanging on to Roy's cock while Roy was going down on him?). I love how you're keeping the tension building, and working in the inconveniences of Ed's condition as well as the benefits. Also, love the mention of Roy still grieving for Riza! I was a bit worried she had been forgotten :( But I shouldn't have feared :) And now, here at the end, a return to plot...I am really really curious to see how Ed is going react to this one :OOOOOO

(Disregard that, I am an idiot. Just reread this and I understand the sex scene perfectly. Apparently I fail at basic story comprehension past midnight :P)

I like how they're moving along at an easy pace, not rushing into anything. And canon is back! yay!

Eep! Ish Greed and his freaky ear-to-ear grin. You know, in so many ways this is like watching (sorry, reading) the episodes with a slight twist. Ed can't save Al in his condition so who will? ;-; Oh maaaaaaaaaaan. (Remind me who was Izumi's teacher again?)

This is the first Mpreg I have read and I find myslef waiting for the next chapter to read how things go on. You are really talented and thanks to you I finaly posted a story after a long time think; naaah, don't wanna....
You really keep 'em all in character which is hard but you do a find jobb and somehow make a guy with a swollen belly seem like a beautiful thing, and the relationship is so sweet and loving....awwwww.....
Keep on the good work, yu have many fans and you are worth every good thing we say and praise!

holy crap!! I turn away for a little while and look at all the awsome chapters that are here o_O!!!

still very beleivable and I'm enjoying this a lot!!! I love the slow progression (but not too slow XD) of Ed and Roy's relationship. I think it's very true to their characters!! I look forward to more XD

kiki

YAY! GO ROY! about time Archer got thrown out on his ass! I hate him... woulda kicked the crap out of him for touching the cat... but nice catch Fuery!! oh! and I like the way things are going with Ed and Roy. SO SWEET! great fic!!! *anxiously awaiting next chapter*
Kuragari

sorry i've sorta of been lingering around your story just reading not reviewing, for that im sorry.

I have couple things to say to you:

First, You are an amazing writer. You draw me into the story so much. The way you discribe things...makes me feel like im their. You decribe emotions very well. This whole story is wonderful, i love it so much.
I love where this story is going. You don't make them all happy and everything going perfect...there are twists and turns. I love it! It is a great plot. Everyday i sign on and look for an update. No lie. I always find one too. Thats another thing, you are so great with updates. I don't know how you do it but I always see you updating within almost the next day it seems. and as a fan of yours and reader i have to say thank you. Because i hate it when i have to wait a million years for an update.

This story is cute, sweet, different, suspenseful and i never know whats gonna happen next. I love how you don't rush to fast into things. I have never really read a Roy/ed Male Preg before...after reading this i went off to find somemore and I can say that they were not as great as yours.

I have tried writing M Preg and I have to say it isnt easy (from one writer to another) I mean, people may think it's just writing but theres so much you got to do. Believe me i know :]

And your story is fantastic, it's perfect I love it. Don't listen to anyone telling you otherwise because their just jealous of your writing abilitys ^_^

Well, I'm looking forward to the next update.

Archer needs to go die....really. Make a chimera eat him. lol

<3 CGL

what can i say? i loved that chapter! even with archer in it, it was awesome. i love how their relationship is progressing. keep it up!!