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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah man! i was so ready to kill archer! doing that to Roy, i mean really, gah!! good chapter! cant wait to find out what happens next! i will be patient and wait for the next chapter! (>*.*)> "yay!"
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sweet (Ed and Roy) Archer's still a prick.
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I god, I adore you. First, for Havoc being so protective of Roy. All the guys being protective of him, really. For Roy throwing Archer out on his ass. And for them not going all the way yet, for Roy taking his time and for Ed being so sensitive and the two of them about to spend the night together. Much love for this.
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Archer's gone. Jackass, asshole, freak. And would you look at that he has a band of freaks under him *rolls eyes* You're having fun with this, I can tell. What a way to make Roy and Ed's life complicated.
I really liked how you took it slowly, taking into account that Ed is really sensitive *thumbs up* Update soon!
I really liked how you took it slowly, taking into account that Ed is really sensitive *thumbs up* Update soon!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww!
-Sniffles and pouts-
So close! Yes... I'm still reading and I love this fan-fiction so much, you doing great at keeping it moving pretty fast, thats just what I like and I think part of the reason I'm still hooked. I find myself looking at this everyday BUT! I also ready this because you have kept everyone in amazing character, which is understandably hard.
You have done very well.
I love this chapter though, because.. Well... The mishap...
I love it!
-Sniffles and pouts-
So close! Yes... I'm still reading and I love this fan-fiction so much, you doing great at keeping it moving pretty fast, thats just what I like and I think part of the reason I'm still hooked. I find myself looking at this everyday BUT! I also ready this because you have kept everyone in amazing character, which is understandably hard.
You have done very well.
I love this chapter though, because.. Well... The mishap...
I love it!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and, loved this one just like your inuyasha one. I like how the pregnancy has been explained, although I'm sure many people have said so already...yeah, awesome, one of the few believable male pregnancy stories around. nice! The date scene and their friends finding out was hysterical. I liked the 'shopping like guys' moment. the one thing i have a hard time envisioning is the pregnant belly with an aroused male...but I think that's just because it's so hard to visualize! ANyway, looking forward to more!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i hav to say is update this story...now. i can't stop reading it. since i read the first chapter i couldn't get enough, i must have more ed/roy action. so if u would please update update update. lol i luv this fic!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fucking archer, i kinda always wanna punch him in the face. but then ed and roy got all lovey and fluffy because of it and i almost forgive him. almost. still *squee* fic love, and way to go with the updates, you're getting them out like woah :D
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ed, he feels so humilated and ugly. His body is doing all these wierd things and it's changing against his will. He wants Roy, but i'm sure he feel s that there really is not way Roy would want himin return. Roy's doing a good job of showing Ed that he wants him. It's sweet. All that time you've spent building the relation ship has paid off, and i hope to see you continue to make it grow into something solid.
Why is it, that when i look back on these things i type... that they never seem to really make any sense...
Why is it, that when i look back on these things i type... that they never seem to really make any sense...
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*glares* Archer should die. Now. Painfully. Or maybe he should be transmuted into something really ugly and slimy. Yup. >:E