rate_review Reviews

Hi - Just finished reading "For Her. For Him" (all in one sitting! I couldn't stop!). Wow. Great way to weave the anime version of events into your own plotline. Before the Roy/Ed pairing I was never a fan of yaoi, but those two are HOT together (no pun intended for the Flame!). I only know the anime version, BTW, but was able to follow it all in your work. Thank you!

And now I'm off to jump into the sequel.

read it all in one hour
*note need to sit and absorb all the info
great story i loved it
well cya!

Loved your version of FMA. I liked how you reworked it and made it yours. The plot made logical sense. You made the slow growing relationship and male pregnancy believable. It took me about 2 days to read it....I could not stop and when I was forced to your story would not leave my imagination. I already started reading the sequel. You are a talented writer and would love to see what you will do in the future. Thanks for the great ride.

Okay, one reason I dislike aff.net is not being able to respond like I can on live journal, but I do want to defend Raine, and Dice I hope you read this to understand why she's there.
I needed a role filled, and the existing cast didn't quite cover it. Her name was chosen to play on the fact that Roy's name is essentially King in French, and Raine is a similar variant. Mary-Sues are self-insertions, and if I was anything like Raine, I think my family would shoot me. Yes, she's an OC, and I didn't want to do it, but the image of Roy having an obnoxious older sister, with a personality to match his own wouldn't go away. And, she is not romantically involved in this story or the next with any of the major characters. Mary-Sue is such a derogatory phrase for a character because they are generally mindless clones of their creators, and Raine is definitely not that. If nothing else, she's more a variant of Roy than anything.

That was...such a cruel ending...I’ll be around for part two, and hopefully, we’ll get to see more from our happy couple.

OMG i love this story and i would love if you maded a sequel. It was awesome. it was definately the best way to pass a weekend of boredom. keep up the great writing! >.<

and there was one where the cat and Black Hayate did it...oh my gosh, so funny. love the fic so far!

OMG that was a really good read! Haha yet half the time I had to sneak over to wikipedia cuz I was confused who the characters and what the plot was about, for you see I've never read a Full Metal Alchemist manga or seen an episode in my life!!! Haha and yet I'm addicted to your story! I love all the characters, love the crack moments they have and how much they care for each other, esp Roy and Ed!!! Haha I love this couple [from doujishi and now your story!] I actually cared more for the plot than the lemon moments, which is rare when I read slash fics :X

I'm going over to part 2 now, just thought I'd give you some support first :D

YAY ^^

By God, that was beautiful. Now I have to go read part 2...

Way too good for MPreg, by the way. I don't usually ever even consider reading them.