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Oh no the plot thickens! Archer is snooping around, and that can't bode well for Roy! I really can't wait to see what happens next.

Also, I loved the part where Ed was getting a little too squirmy on top of Roy, very hot!

was this the story where roy and archer had a past? can't remember (as i'm keeping tabs on one other fma story), but i can honestly say i did not see that coming. and wtf did archer bring that fucking moves? i don't even want to think about it, though i'm dying to know, really. and, oh god, please don't have archer finding out or even suspecting about ed. that would tear me apart!! update soon!!

ah! great continuation! i cant wait to read the end of this! when do ED HAVE THE BABIES!?!?! they will be so cute and strong i bet. lol (>*.*)> *hugs*

Poor Ed, his face must have been on fire when had to ask the doctor about sex!

Archer, two words for you: Get. Lost. Please and thank you :P What a grand way to ruin a perfect night. I'm just wondering if Archer is trustable. I mean a present from him can never be a good thing. Can it?

Okay, I'm done ranting. Onto the comments. XD I like how Havoc got the credit even though they all thanked Gracia silently. And Ed's gift was so cute x3 Really nice of him. You wouldn't happen to know when Roy's birthday is would you?

Update soon. I wanna see what'll happen ><

Woah, the devil is knocking at the door. Didn't see that coming. Man i hope Ed can hide or SOMETHING. What is Archer's strange motivation here? Roy better seriously watch out. Anyway, it was a good chap. Fast too! Update soon.

I love it you came up with your own plot but the characters have the same personality. Please write more of your fucking fabulous story1

Nice one Edward! Woo! XD Roy's stuck now. He may as well just admit. If you're that they'll be a lime soon then I can't wait. Well... I can but you know what I mean. Update soon!

I don't make a habit of reviewing. Unfortunately. As a beta reader for a rather busy author, I find myself horribly critical and find that reviews tend to be more critique than anything.
However, I had to take time to sit down and write a review for this story.
Let me start with, I absolutely adore this story and story line.
I've never read an M-preg I've been impressed with. You have done a fabulous job at pulling me into this story and done a great job of handling Ed. You've kept them in character as best as possible. Given their situation.
I have to admit to being addicted. LOL. I check 3 or 4 times a day for updates. I'm a sucker for this story and storyline.
I also commend you for not falling to the cries for lemons. I think the building of character and relationship that you have taken the time to formulate here, is so much more important.
I also admire your wherewithall to continue at the rate that you do. Kudos to you. That takes a lot. I know.
You've managed to bring your characters to life and do a good job of sharing their feelings and confusion. I must say, I'm impressed.
Very good job and keep up the good battle. It's a great story.
It's so unusual that I find a story that I will bother to finish and yet, here I sit, everyday, actively seeking updates. LOL. It's a pleasure.

*L* That's cute, how Jean just attacks. It's nice that they didn't spaz over the situation.