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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can I express my undying love and devotion for the fact that you allowed them to FIND OUT? While I was prepared for some kind of humorous attempt at concealing Ed's secret, it's so nice Roy can trust his men enough to just *tell them*. They're not stupid
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Ed is an evil little devil, isn't he? *grins* Perfect revenge against Mustang! ^__^
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the interaction between Roy and his subbordinates. They're a good group of guys, and very charming in their own distinct ways. I felt they were very IC and Fuery was such a sweety!
And Evil!Ed and the kiss was wonderful! Way to torture Mustang!
And Evil!Ed and the kiss was wonderful! Way to torture Mustang!
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo, a kiss, a kiss, and another kiss, interesting. i originally thought, when are they gonna get to the sex? come on i want some sex! but i feel like this is better, more realistic, because now they /can't/ have sex, the doctor basically told them not to, and they have to actually develop a relationship. and you can see the relationship developing between them in the fic, its beautiful really. and you always update so /fast/, as an author myself that is very very impressive *fic love* :D
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh love! Seriously i love this story so much, its so cute, and your a great writer, i cant wait to see more updates from you!
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fantastic!! finally, they know!! this was a great chapter. i loved it so much. and i can't wait for the next chapter. this is such a wonderful story. keep up the great work, and update soon!!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, so cute! *goes all girly*
Ok, I'm good now. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while---it's been a busy week. Good couple of chapters! It'll be interesting to see what Breda, Havoc and Fuery have to say to Roy about his "date."
Ok, I'm good now. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while---it's been a busy week. Good couple of chapters! It'll be interesting to see what Breda, Havoc and Fuery have to say to Roy about his "date."
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh i like this chapter! So things are growing between them. This is gonna get interesting and it just gets better. Update soon!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved that I reviewed before but I fall asleed before I read all of this chapter. wow I'm so exsited that ed said something that was pricless about Ed not wanting to kiss a girl and Roys line about liking Ed togue to the dogs. I would too!
I love this story. and hope for more kissing action in the furture.
I love this story. and hope for more kissing action in the furture.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD I love the image of young Maes and Roy experimenting on each other because they're too macho to risk embarrassing themselves - then they embarrass themselves further. Also, I like poor Ed trying to deal with his body going haywire, and not being too happy about it. Poor guy.