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Aw, cute!

I got review 100!

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I love this so much!

It great you keep updating so fast. Your keeping me on the edge of my seat. You play the two out really well and I love the way you have kept the m-preg as realistic as you can when it's with a guy. -Grins-

I read this whole story last night and into this morning I was to tried then to review, but this got to be one of the best Mpregs ever and I actually couldn't stop myself from reading the whole this through. I like the freelings and emotions you put into this and the hormones are so real. It takes me back to my own child baring experence. I loved Roy reactions to Riza's death and then to what Ed did. I think you made Al a little meaner in the being than I think you should have. I like how they didn't jump into bed together and this relationship is going slow. I like that it is not forced yet my perverted mind drifed my times to what I'd like happen and I think we need a dream sceen maybe on roy's behalf because Ed feelings seem to be hanging. Just a thought don't kill me and don't want to change this fic. I love your Artcher he is the number one slizzyest badguy and you write him so will I would love to see bad things happen to him. though I cringed just a little that Roy fucked him,but I think that added to the moment and I'm glade you did have him do anything to Ed though because the thought of it was enough of a squee factor for me. I liked Izumi's appearence all though at frist I though it cliche for a mpreg Izumi always shows up but I liked this and I can't even say why. I like your Sig he actually spoke and made interaction and he hit Roy and for the frist time I didn't want to kick you for it. I like that you put the morning sickness in but didn't make a big deal of it like in every mpreg I read. I like Dr.Knox and Poor Ed your going to make him give birth from there. I rub my ass in sypimthy( I no thats wrong spelling) I think that was the part of it i like lest. It made me think of bathroom problems. I like there is an interested plot, but it seemed like the war ended with Riza's death. I also like you keep to the anime on this too like Roy going after scar and Ed and Al yock Island with wrath was great I love the little changes you made. I loved loved that kiss I held my own breath and I like the how Roy was dicribing his frist kiss. You gave a hint that there was a popcorn fight and I melted.

This is just a great fic and I'm hoping for more soon.

Teehee. That was cute. They're both a pair of dorks. Especially with Ed who couldn't talk properly. x3 Such a cute chapter. Hmmmmmmmm >> Can't tell if Roy likes him back though. Sounds like it that's for sure. Yay. Update soon!

More cuteness. The dog bathing Roy made me laugh. Yay! real progress in the relation ship, and congrats on the review count, you diserve it.

now that was an interesting event. the relationship progresseth, ne? i don't think i ever mentioned it, but i do appreciate that you're taking their relationship at a slow pace, it adds so much to the story and makes it really believeable... aside from the alchemically impregnated man. ^.^ can't wait for the next update!

well that ended on a sad note, but i'm so grateful it wasn't archer watching them. oh, and i thought it was priceless when they started fretting over baby things. bad thing they can't tell anyone about ed being pregnant or they could get all that stuff for free at a baby shower!! ahahaha

i can't wait for your next update. this has got to be one of my fav fma stories. *kinda does and kinda doesn't want to know how havoc and the others will react when mustang's next in the office*

Hm, I can't wait to see what happens when Mustang's men call him on this supposed betrayal of Hawkeye - also, what a perfectly lovely first kiss! Very sweet and hot.

SCOOOOOORE!!!!XDDDD can't wait for the next update hehehe...

He's not regretting it, he's wishing it could be for other reasons. Does Roy return said feelings or is this just because Ed is pregnant with his kids? Mustang you had better not be like that :( Can't wait for the next update!