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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet kiss, with a sad aftertaste. Very nicely written.
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I like Ed having to react to the changes he's going through. Especially for somebody so used to being fit, it's going to piss him off to get larger. I'd imagine before long he's going to start having to keep a lower profile though, maybe not go into the office so much...he's not going to gain weight like a guy normally would, and people will think it's weird. Maybe 'extended medical leave'?
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I am so glad you're addressing the question of Ed going stir-crazy. Him going in disguise is really the best plan, and allows Roy to accompany him easier. (Heh, Roy might take heat for having knocked a girlfriend up, but well.) Hopefully this will help him feel a little better.
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*twitches* Wow, you make Archer worth hating XD I loooooove reading this. Your writing style makes it so much better. *goes off to read the other chapters*
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god the names fit perfectly. At least Ed has someone to talk to now other than Roy. Please don't make it so that the first lemon is ArcherRoy ;-; I might cry. Great work as usual.
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Ed agreed without knowing it! Nice one! Roy's lucky Ed didn't kick him or something. I can't wait to see how the date turns out.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it hasn't even been ten days since i last read this fic, and it went from chapter 7 to chapter 16!! holy crap! and it's just so good! i was kind of afraid that scar would get roy or wrath would try to take ed's body, but you pulled through. and the archer/roy element is something i've never really read or liked, but you made it work, and i commend you (it's seriously hard to get me to even consider crack pairings). keep it up, and i can't wait for your next update!!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its nice to see the relationship that ed and roy share develop over time, as they get closer. it seems like they're oblivious to it, but those around them arent and i think thats just so /them/. your voice is really engaing too, and i can't wait to hear more.
*fic love*
*fic love*
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THE NAMES ARE PERFECT!!!! i love them!!! *jumps up and down fangirling* and now.. i wanna go slap archer and maybe breda too... *mutters... inconsiderate bastard...* YEY for updates! cant wait for the next chapter!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have had a lot of fun reading this story, but a bit of plot nitpicking and some spelling nitpicking too. It's spelled "Fuhrer" not "fuehrer". Plus, Mustang would have been a state alchemist before he decided to become fuhrer- he came up with that idea after he killed the Rockbells and he was clearly a state alchemist by then. Am I mistaken?