rate_review Reviews

that was adorable, once again. you never manage to dissapoint, and so quick with the updates. if you were here i think i would kiss you :D
*fic love*

p.s. the names: they are perfect by the way. i think mybe using them is sentimental and weird, but thats how you /get/ when your pregnant, and making them middle names makes a lot of sense. and *squee* for the boys first date (even if it isnt really a /date/ date, its still *awesome* :p )

Man oh man, I leave the computer for a few hours and you post TWO new chapters. *sigh* Oh well. It's great to see the boys getting closer, and I really like the names you chose.

good job so far! love it! more more more!!!

Wow, i don't check for like a day or two and you put up like 4 chapters. I'd have to say my fav out of this set would be the falshback chapter between Archer and Mustang. Flashbacks can be diffucult and tedious, but i thought yours was fantastic. Breaking up the present with the past was a smooth move, and well done. Neither setion of the scene was too long,m and it flowed ver well. I commend you, it was very enjoyable.

I also like the names you chose, much better than the crap i could have come up with... but that's one of the reasons i gave up writting, no creativity. That and i suck...

It's nice to see this story grow, i think it's really coming along now. Looking forward to more!

OMGosh! that was such a sweet chapter! lol poor Ed, well he should look on the bright side ^^... I can't wait for the next chapter :)

I liked these chapters alot! I also like that you update so fast, yay! The names are CUTE. I like it alot. And the way the relationship bewteen Ed and Roy is developing is almost beleivable. Good job. The next chaps are gonna be interesting im sure. Ed in drag lol. Update soon!

I honestly do like your story and I love mpreg. I just happen to think that a good review needs to include a mention on the technical aspects and plot points as well as "KEEP WRITING LOLZ".
I do hope you continue, cause its a fun read. I have no real experience with pregnancy, but about how far along is Ed now? I forget when you can start feeling the baby and I have no idea if you can really feel them doing flips. *shrugs* I know my niece kicked in a particular place, but it felt like a light flutter.
(Yeah, I nitpick, but I really do like the story)

Poor Roy; what a prick Archer was being. It's a bit scary to get so many reviews, isn't it? At least I find it so. Makes me nervous. *L*

Oooh I love this! The intrigue between Roy and Archer is excellent. I feel bad for Roy, Archer really did have his balls to the wall in the past. Here's hoping he can triumph over the bastard this time around!

**headtilt.. wtf look*** archer... and .. roy.. wow. never would have thought that pair up. genius i say, how you portrayed their past. i loved it. and all the short references to roy! that was perfect. i really really cant wait to see the next chapters!