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ooo, I hate Archer!! the guy's such a dick!! but WOOT for Roy!!! that's how you handle those bastards!!! nice story!! ^-^

Wow another wonderful chapter...Roy has a very interesting past...0.o

This is such a wonderful story. I cannot wait to see how this whole thing turns out.

Yay!! another great chapter glad Al and Ed turned out all right ^^ can't wait for the next chapter! -gives you cookie-

Oooh! I like there being, you know, BACKPLOT between Archer and Roy! It makes their hatred and rivalry even more interesting. And I like how Roy is really starting to be more helpful to Ed, and Ed is still trying to be out and about in the world despite issues like the hormones and the growing evidence. What happens when he can no longer hide how he looks? That's going to be difficult indeed.

And yay to Al getting a kitten and to being the intelligent one here - Riza and Maes will bring up a lot of bad memories for some. Maybe those can be middle names?

Poor Ed! Eight at a time, how gross.

Fuery took the words right out of my mouth at the end. Ed and Roy are just so cute the way Ed ended up falling asleep on him. The cat's an actual cat right? Not just Envy or something >> I'm bad for thinking up odd plots ^^; Sorry. Update soon I love this story!!

Oh my god... That was amazing!! I'll admit that this is the first time I've read a MPreg story but wow... this was awesome.

Your writing style makes it so fun to read to. You portray the characters greatly too. I'll admit the first hints of RoyRiza made me twitch, the fact that it fell into a RoyEd (eventually right?) really got me into this story. What can I say, I love my RoyEd.

I have to say that Archer made me shiver. Great portrayal for him ­­>> He scared me before and I think you just doubled that fright XD This is a good thing of course.

This story is really touching. I was almost in tears a few times as I read. Roy's reply to Izumi asking if he pampered all his subordinates like that made me laugh. This story is the perfect mix of everything.

I can't wait till you update this. I'd really love to read more. Are there any possibilities that you e-mail me when you update?

Once again, great work on a well-written story.

Very good bluff to cover the hormones WAY TO GO ED!!!

I am loving ths fic thurs far.

Wow... I L-O-V-E this story it's different, which is sooo bloody brilliant! Please update as soon as possible and I'll give you a cookie ^^ Ja!