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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, intrigue! I like the idea of Ed attempting to get close to Wrath, attempting to temper his own anger...only to have Envy show up and mess everything up. And I like the idea of Ed in Archer's hands, and in need of medication! What will happen next! :O
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo...i love this! *droll* Ed...pregant...girly figures...XXDD I really do love this story! ~Ja ne~
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stop it! You're making me look bad! (Or worse than usual) *L* I'm kidding, it's a great chapter. I honestly don't see anything wrong with it, nothing that jumps out at me. If you're looking for names, there are some really good name dictionaries that are really useful for meanings and such. keep it up!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i kno theres a resonable explaination for roy saying.. cutie... but i still just wanna yell "BASTARD!!"...
anyways.. YEY for updates! cant wait for more chapters!
anyways.. YEY for updates! cant wait for more chapters!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed this story, please continue.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You and your cliffies. Though, honestly, I know it could be a whole lot worse. So I'm not complaining. ::Grins:: I'm thrilled you're getting chapters out so quickly, even if I don't always review. ::snugs::
Since the children's names were brought up, I think I'll add my own opinion, if you don't mind. ^-^ I honestly wasn't surprised to see that those were the names you picked, and I understand the need to make Roy feel like shit (it's just so -fun- to do), but if it were me, I would change them later on. Possibly right after the children are born? ::Thinks:: The way I'm seeing it is, that whenever Ed and Roy call them by their names, they're both going to remember Riza and Maes. They could easily (and perhaps unconciously) compair the children to their late friends. What if Riza turns out to be this girly girl who loves flowers, hates guns and dogs, and is a meek girl? She is -always- going to be compaired to the first Riza. As will Maes. The children will sense the compairison, since we know they'll know about the first Riza and Maes, and it could be painful for them, and everyone involved. Or perhaps I'm thinking far too hard on it. xD
No, I don't know -what- to name them, but perhaps something -based- off of the names Riza and Maes might be better than calling them that. They're their own person, and yadda yadda. My opinion. <3 You go with whatever you feel is right.
Keep up the good work!
Since the children's names were brought up, I think I'll add my own opinion, if you don't mind. ^-^ I honestly wasn't surprised to see that those were the names you picked, and I understand the need to make Roy feel like shit (it's just so -fun- to do), but if it were me, I would change them later on. Possibly right after the children are born? ::Thinks:: The way I'm seeing it is, that whenever Ed and Roy call them by their names, they're both going to remember Riza and Maes. They could easily (and perhaps unconciously) compair the children to their late friends. What if Riza turns out to be this girly girl who loves flowers, hates guns and dogs, and is a meek girl? She is -always- going to be compaired to the first Riza. As will Maes. The children will sense the compairison, since we know they'll know about the first Riza and Maes, and it could be painful for them, and everyone involved. Or perhaps I'm thinking far too hard on it. xD
No, I don't know -what- to name them, but perhaps something -based- off of the names Riza and Maes might be better than calling them that. They're their own person, and yadda yadda. My opinion. <3 You go with whatever you feel is right.
Keep up the good work!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::mutters:: It cut off my review. Do I ramble that much? >.>;;
Anyways, as I was saying, 'My opinion. You go with whatever you feel is right. <3 I can't wait to read more.
Keep up the good work!
Anyways, as I was saying, 'My opinion. You go with whatever you feel is right. <3 I can't wait to read more.
Keep up the good work!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue~!!!! I can't wait to see how Ed and Roy's relationship grows.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sob* It was so short.....no!!! It also has a little cliff hanger... evil...
Though seriously, my geuss is that Mustang was trying to to call up Gracia for some reaso or another and Elysia anwered the phone.
The new chapter was a treat as always..but it was short.... *cries*
As for names.. i dunno, i'm not good at that stuff *Hikaru! is not a writer and she knows it...* If you wanted them to be an homage to the deceased in Roy's life, you could have names that were similar and obviously taken from theirs. Liza and Michael were what popped into my mind.
Looking forward to more!
Though seriously, my geuss is that Mustang was trying to to call up Gracia for some reaso or another and Elysia anwered the phone.
The new chapter was a treat as always..but it was short.... *cries*
As for names.. i dunno, i'm not good at that stuff *Hikaru! is not a writer and she knows it...* If you wanted them to be an homage to the deceased in Roy's life, you could have names that were similar and obviously taken from theirs. Liza and Michael were what popped into my mind.
Looking forward to more!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens! I like how you included that they searched Ed's bag and found the hormone medicine. It's hard to keep up with the little details when writing and you're doing a fine job of it!