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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, that last -lauhg- paragraph was -dies and comess back- hilarious! Damned hormones! Ha ha ha, keep going! :D
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh noes! they're splitting them up! oh and i love ed crying moodswings! i was so excited you updated and now i cant wait for more! the transmuting al into a tin can comment was so amusing btw. this is such great story! update soon!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so fascinating, I love it! And you update so quickly, which is fabulous. Keep it up!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sheesh, now you've got me being all emotional...but it's okay! It'll be interesting to see how they deal with Ed's *ahem* "growths" in the near future. Update soon, please!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why? why make roy go away? T.T i am so sad! make sure he comes back to Ed! *sniffle* otherwise, i still love this story!! keeps me wanting to read and find out whats gonna happen!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I like Roy being forced to pay attention to this problem. And him worrying about boundaries etc, as opposed to the cheap-porn-plot you usually get when someone is forced to bathe someone else. Roy legitimately had Ed's best interests here.
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the picture of ed being angry with his hormones making him cry - especially receiving estrogen shots, he'd be especially sensitive to ups and downs.
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I like how this is tying into canon now! Hopefully Ed can survive meeting Wrath...
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooo! The plot thickens! Dun dun duh!!! I like how you're incorperating events from the show like the discovery of Wrath. Very nice! These means we get to see more of Izumi!! Yayness.
I did think the whole naming the kids after Hughes and Hawkeye was a little lame and overdone, but i suppose it was necessary to make Mustang feel like crap for treating Ed 'like a vessel.'
But overall, still enjoying the story! I look forward to more!
I did think the whole naming the kids after Hughes and Hawkeye was a little lame and overdone, but i suppose it was necessary to make Mustang feel like crap for treating Ed 'like a vessel.'
But overall, still enjoying the story! I look forward to more!
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww! i like it! is roy really starting to care for Ed? T.T i want them to be happy!!