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Ooooh dear, set backs! That seems very appropriate though; there's a lot of changes going on here. And I do like the fact that Mustang is still grieving for his lost partner, though I hope he can rally eventually. And Al, stop being a little bitch and come support your bleeding and sick brother! D:

yay!! so many chapters at once! just the way I like it XD

I continue to enjoy this fic...sometime mpreg just aren't 'right' if you follow...but this one seems believble to me so it's all good XD

kiki

I can't wait until you update this again, I really love the story and I can't wait to see what happens!

::Whines:: Evil cliffy. But I suppose I shouldn't complain, you update this rather quickly. Thankfully.

I'll have to admit, I was rather wary of reading this fic when I first spotted it >.>;; I'm picky when it comes to Mpreg fics, and I was rather scared this would turn into a girl!Ed fanfic, which I'll almost -never- read. But I'm honestly loving the entire thing. Riza's death was very touching, as was Ed's choice in keeping the babies. And I applaud you for not getting Roy and Ed together right away, if you plan on getting them together at all. But, the very least, a relationship is building, be it platonic or romantic, I think.

I rather like Al's reaction, because it's different than what you'd normally see. I think Alphonse is allowed to be selfish every once in a while. And what Ed did was a very big thing. An Izumi and Sig were great; Roy really did need to get the shit beat out of him.

Keep up the good work <3 I can't wait to read more of this.

yey! eds a tranny! **dont shoot!** that was such a good chapter!!!! so sweet! and ed can have the babies now! yey! now the only question is when i roy gonna realize he's madly in love with ed/ vice versa and when are those lovely hormones *increased sex drive* gonna kick in! lol. this is a great story and i really cant wait for the next chapter!

Awww...I really like Mustang's character for some reason. I also love that he doesn't just fall right in love with Ed either; the process of developing affection for him is obvious. You're doing a lovely job with this story!

Oooh, several things about this are love! For one, I love Roy being observant on one level and getting the tar pounded out of him...then I love how Izumi turned it around and pointed out that Roy needs to remember to treat Ed like a person. Roy needs to grieve, but not to take his grief out on Ed at the same time. Hope there's more soon - on the edge of my seat <3

Yay, i love Mpregs! But finding ones that are well thought out and well written is a chore. Your story is one of those pearls in a sea of clams. I like the unusual that Ed becomes pregnant, and i think it adds a whole 'nother dimension to the story. The characterization is good, and i'm enjoying everyone's roles in the story. I really like Izumi and her talk with Mustang at the end of chapter 6. It's great at giving voice to what Mustang's been feeling and hinting at since the ordeal happened. I've always really liked Izumi's character, and i'm glad you brought her in and let her be the great catalyst she is. I look forward to more chapters!

HOLY CRAP! I HATE CLIFF HANGERS! ur evil, just so you kno. oh, and i swear! you people *authors* cant let poor ed carry a child in peace! 99% of the time when i find an mpreg!ed story he always ends up in a puddle of blood somehow and/or loses the baby! please dont do that! please!

on a lighter note..i really like this story, youre doing a great job and i really really cant wait for the next chapter! *walks away mumbling about stupid cliff hangers...*

ahaha! we have the same name! but this story!! omg, i love it. it's so deep. and this evil, evil cliffhanger!! i can't wait until you update, i so loooooove this story! the emotions, and what is happening to ed?! keep it up!