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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, I really like adding other characters into the mix. Other people DO care about Ed and Al besides just Roy, after all! And I do like that Ed is being so determined in the face of all this adversity, and that he's owned up to Izumi about what is going on. Wonder how she's going to react...the woman who wanted so badly to be a mother, then lost the ability to conceive...
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, it's a smooth story. Seems a bit odd to see someone pregant without the sex too! *L* Nice though, I really like it.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again, glad to see that people are in fact grieving over Hawkeye! That's so important. And love for how Ed is being the strong one here. Ed has a lot of strength to him; I think he's pretty resilient.
Now if only they can get him to eat...
Now if only they can get him to eat...
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!^-^
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eeek....that was close. Good chapter!
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love that you updated with two chapters XD
the story is coming along nicely and I really like it so far!! one thing...watch out for the 'Al' verus 'All' this is happening quite a bit, try reading your fic aloud if you don't have a beta, this will help you find these XD
kiki
the story is coming along nicely and I really like it so far!! one thing...watch out for the 'Al' verus 'All' this is happening quite a bit, try reading your fic aloud if you don't have a beta, this will help you find these XD
kiki
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is interesting. Is it mangaverse?
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, normally I don't read mpreg? But this has a very interesting set up to it! Please do write more, I'm dying to know what's going on. Also, I love how everyone IS in fact mourning Hawkeye's death (wibble).
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was interesting. Do continue. @_@ Ill be really hurt if you didnt
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy cow!! that was a great start...can't wait for chapter 3!!
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