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for For Her. For Him.

by nomdeplume

schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that was just SWEEEEEET. Like holding a warm bottle of water over my heart. Anyway, Ed had the babies yeah! The kids sound adorable, and the scene was actually well written. Kudos to you! Ed and Roy deserve this happiness. Update soon.
person milky
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The babies are here safe and sound. It's touching that Roy pushed himself to be there.
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well done
person Elvish Lady
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWW! I can not tell you how much I have enjoyed this! You made me really love Wrath! I do hope that you decide to continue this, but as it is, I have to say that it is a wonderful ending! I love the contrast between Aideen and Nicholas, both with personality and the way that that react to Ed's Automail, it makes it seem much more realistic (at least to me). Props to you, my dear.
*hugs*
Elvish Lady
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so sweet! good job and i look forward to reading Part2!!
person Blissful Ignorance
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! -throws balloons- Yay for Roy and Ed, yay for Aideen and Nicholas, the little buggers! Wooooo! I loved this story so much! I'm kind of sad it's over, but, yay for the part 2! (Yay for everything!) :33333333333 Yayyyyy!!!
person nette
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
as i hav said countless times...i luved this story XD! i am sad that this story has come to an end but im gald it ended on a happy note. we finally got to see the twins yay and i must say the way u described them sound lik lil heartbreakers especially aideen. i can't wait for the sequel so get the writing XD. kidding kidding but no seriously get to writing.
person Alkek
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It's done!!!
I have been checking this website every night to see if you've updated.
Now I can't wait for part 2! (don't think i'm rushing you, though)
person inuyoukaimama
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic.
Simply fantastic!
Thanks for sharing it!

Round 2, huh?
That would be stunning!
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A great ending to a great story! YAY! This whole story has been one wild ride and I have loved every single minute of it! :) Roy and Ed make quite a pair now with all the automail and artificial parts they've got! ;) The little conversation they had comparing scars was just what Roy needed. He needed to make peace with himself and know that Ed loves and accepts him just the way he is. And that Ed will kick his ass if he keeps feeling sorry for himself! :D It made me a teeny bit sad when Ed said that he couldn't feel Aideen's hand on his finger and that Nicholas couldn't stand the automail at all. But, I won't get weepy over that 'cause Roy and Ed are finally getting married! YAY!!! Oh wait. I cry at weddings too. Ah hell, where's my tissues? LOL!! XD Major Edward Elric and Fuhrer Roy Mustang. nice! Does the spouse of the fuhrer get a title? Fuhrer Bradley was sometimes called King Bradley. Would that make Roy King Roy Mustang and Ed Prince Consort Edward Elric? LOL! What a concept! *giggles* I'll behave myself now! ;) Are you going to be focusing primarily on Wrath in part 2? I know you've developed a fondness for the little guy. I guess I'll find out soon enough! :)
Thanks for this wonderful little story! You've made my day! *hugs*
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. It was too cute when Al walked in on Ed breastfeeding Aideen! Al is so adorable when he's embarrassed! :)

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