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for For Her. For Him.

by nomdeplume

person Aelia
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Usually I don't read MPreg, and for FMA I prefer canon pairings like Roy/Riza...but the fact that this is completely possible and believable make me a loyal fan. Kudos to you. I just sat for three hours and read all 40 chapters, and can't wait for the next!

And a weird part of me feels there are undertones of Gracia/Havoc. Please, tell me I'm wrong?
person Tori_santa
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm not very eloquent when reviewing, but I'll do my best.

I found this on lj, and I've been reading to catch up constantly since Friday. I finished it Sunday night, and I'm so excited to read the next chapter. I even stayed up all night on Saturday (till almost 4 a.m.) until I ran out of chapters on LJ. (the next day I found out you had more over here... Grr) I guess it's a good thing I didn't know about them cuz then I REALLY wouldn't have gotten any sleep.

I love the way you keep them so in character, especially you way you mix the way that non Preggo's Ed would respond with the way his hormones are working on him. It's a cool balance.

*turns on squee'ish girly mode*Yeah, and so, like, there will be babies soon right!?!*turns it off*
person searcher
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yah! I found some more chapters! I'm off to read Chapter 40 before class...
person searcher
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I can hardly wait for the rest!
person nette
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed this chapter and last chapter. as for havoc and gracia hooking up i think they should because they would complement each other and i think gracia has a inkling towards liking havoc. i see the twins will be making their debut *squeals* XD cant wait and poor roy. with ed and the twins everything should go fine support wise. cant wait to read more XD
person Aelia
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gracia/Havoc? Hmm....try it. Little Elysia needs a father figure.
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* I can barely see what I'm typing for the happy tears in my eyes! Oh Lordy I need more tissues! :) Oh! The babies are so adorable! Ed's not gonna continue to breast feed them is he? Theoretically it's best for them but I don't think he could stand it! LOL!! I was very sad that Roy lost his eye. *dabs away a tear* I was wondering if you'd do that or not. As far as Havoc and Gracia are concerned, hmm, well, hmm, not sure. He seems to like her but I'm not sure she likes him. Gracia really loved Maes and he's only been gone long enough for her to just start moving on. So, yeah, Havoc will get shot down - for now anyway. Eventually tho I think they'll be together since Elysia seems to like him a lot.
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
person KakashiSanzo5790
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O
that was absolutely amazing!
i have truly fallen in love with your story and am so happy that i decided to read it so long ago....(ive been reading from the beginning...i was just being too lazy to review...^.-)
this is a beautifully written fic and i love every moment of it!
i cant wait to read more of your work! ^.^
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YATTA!! they're he~re! such goodness! but does this mean that the story's almost over? what a shame. oh, and i think havoc should finally have a little luck in the field of love. let him and gracia give it go. they both deserve it.

great chapter! update soon!!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! I don't know why, but when I first saw this story I knew I was hooked! I can't wait for the ending. I hope nothing happens to the babies!

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