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for For Her. For Him.

by nomdeplume

person Niia
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that I didn't have the time to review the last chapter. But this one *tears in the corner of the eyes* It's just the sadest chapter I've ever read. Lust is my favourit, and she sacrificed herself. And Wrath! Not Wrath! *cries* he had a soul now! Damn gate! And Izumi died...at first I didn't want it to be true, but I guess in the end it was good, now the two of them could be together. And Al has his body back.
I'm wondering how badly Roy was hurt, if he lost his eye like in the canon. That woud be a shame. And...if I'm not wrong, Ed is having contractions. OMG!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh so THATS what it was about. Well done. I actuality wasn't expecting that to happe to wrath strangely enough. Though, having watched the FMA movie it makes sense hehe. I liked the chapter alot. It was awesome how Raine gave it to this dude good too. It was all around good. Can't wait for the next update.
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh so THATS what it was about. Well done. I actually wasn't expecting that to happen to Wrath strangely enough. Though, having watched the FMA movie it makes sense hehe. I liked the chapter alot. It was awesome how Raine gave it to this dude good too. It was all around good. Can't wait for the next update.
person cuylerjade
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* That was so sad! And exciting! I love the way you changed the ending! Much better than the original! The bad guys died and Ed didn't end up in Germany! *wibbles* Poor Wrath, though. He had finally grown a soul, but sacrificed it for Ed & Al & the babies. Of course, now Al will have to become accustomed to having a niece & nephew again, but.. *shrugs* At least everyone is alive.

Right? *glares*

Roy better be alive. *glares again* *wibbles* *clings*

PWEASE???????? *smooches you*

I am really going to be sorry to see this story end!
person kuragari75
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*nods* that would hurt like hell. nicely done! I love your story and yes it was well worth it ^-^. keep it up! later!
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FREAKING GOD!! Ed's in labor!! :D *squeals of excitement and incoherent babble* Oh! You are killing me!! :D I don't think I can get any more ecstatic and wound up about this story! LOL I'm so completely hooked it's not even funny! XD I have learned one important thing about myself because of the story. No one should let me get near a pregnant person going into labor because I can't control myself and get all manic. :) It would be bad for their health and mine! LOL!! But all that's beside the point! This chapter absolutely rocked! w00t! I had forgotten that the fuhrer's son brought the skull that made it possible for Roy to finally kill the homunculus. Thank the powers that be that Raine is there to help Roy and the boy (whatever his name is)! whew! I do like the way you got rid of Archer - very fitting for the bastard. Will Roy become the fuhrer now? Gah! I can't think about that right now! The babies are coming for Chrissake!! EEP!
Update soon! As in now already! LOL!! XD
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. "a pregnant person"? Jeez. I'm such a yaoi fan it didn't even occur to me to say pregnant woman! LOL!! Yep, I've got it bad! XD Koneko no baka! ;)
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah good good! like this very much! havent read in a while so i caught up today! phew! keep on going!
person kuragari75
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooo, good good good chapter...now... update!!! lol, nice chap. but seriously update soon! later!
person michelle
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can finally review! i don't have an account so i couldn't log in. i love this story. i have a question though. what does waff mean in fanfiction? i don't know all the terms yet.
person Hikaru_9 (aka hikaru!)
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Things are really moving along, i was sad when you stopped it there! I'm totally caught up in the action. Everthing is happening all at once it seems, and Ed's in danger of going into labor fromthe sheer stress of the situation alone! I can't wait for more! I wanna see how you pull off the battle between Roy and Bradley. I'm bummer that Izumi's dying, but she went out like a badass! Like Wrath vs. Gluttony in the moive caliber!

Good to see you're posting it on the fma_yaoi community on lj too. My lj user name is Hikaru_9, that's the reason for the change.... *sighs* too many aliases...

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