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Wow, I really like this! Mustang's sister kicks ass xD

Yo!! I like this chap, and the last few as well. You have really put forth an interesting plot here. Very good. I can't wait to see what happens. And now Lust, Wrath, and Glottony are allied with them. I always liked them better than the others you know. Lol i got a litte laugh outta Wrath being curious about Ed's stomach. Who wouldn't be?? Well, good job once again. Update soon!

Congratulations! Over 9.000 hits! God to hear about the Sloth scene, I thought I was going crazy. And poor Archer! Oh, better not cry infront of you, I have a bad influence on you! Anyway, love the difference from the canon, with Lust, Wrath and Gluttony joining them. But...did Marta die? I mean I know Scar did (so very sad about that), and daah!, Al had to survive, but what about Marta?
And I'm soo excited to see who are these alchemists Raine was talking about! And yay Havoc for taking charge! He might make a great Colonel himself one day (and maybe meet his own Ed and we will have a new generation of Colonel/Major love).
Waiting patiently for the next chapter!

The addition of Lust and co was a pleasant twist. I rather like Lust, both her manga and anime incarnation, so i was pleased at how te last scene went down. I was a bit confused as to the actions and 'area' layout after you starting adding the Trucks and such. I didn't know who was where, why they were driving what should be short distances and the like... though it's about 4 in the morning my time, so that could be a factor.... *needs more sleep*

I'm glad you clarified about the alchemic reaction from the kiddos too. When they first lashed out at Scar, my thought was, "no way." Alchemy is a science, and you have to study the laws and such to make it work properly. Some people may be more talented in the understanding and application of it than others, but they still have to learn how to do alchemy first. You saying that Ed actually used their potential for alchemy, rather than the kids doing alchemy fixed that descrepancy... at least for me!

I do hope you decide to do a sequel, it'd be interesting to see what kind of personalities you give the kids. I have a feeling that your girl is gonna be a little spitfire! lol

luvd it likd it want more of it. i was just wonderng since ur following the storyline a lil bit will u have it end the same...u know...the tear-jerker for many f.m.a. fans to this day...if so pleas dont :(. if not yay XD. i think im going too far into the story now but i just need to know that for sanity's sake. poor guys esp. al becomin the philospher's stone. and now that deal they made things can only get better...i hope...

MOving quickly. *wriggle* I can't wait, I check daily now, just in case.

Well, that was interesting. I like the changes you made from the canon, enough so that it's not like just writing out exactly what someone else already wrote, but no so much that the storyline is unrecognizable. I watched FMA quite awhile ago, but I find myself recalling things. Anyways, I was wondering how close you were going to keep it to canon? Are we going to get a happy ending with Al's body back and Ed still on this side of the gate? That's probably asking too much, might ruin the story. But I find myself still feeling slightly worried about how things are going to turn out for Ed and Roy, what with Dante still out there. I hope that they can get rid of her without having to sacrifice anyone and that they get a happy ending. Yeah:)

Yay, a revolution begins! And I like how everyone has joined up - Roy and Ed are closer here than in the anime, so thankfully Ed didn't try to run off with Al. And Roy knows about the Stone. Excellent!

*chuckling* No, Raine isn't exactly my favorite character but I certainly don't dislike her either. She's just one of those that takes a bit to warm up to! ;) She did earn some bonus points with me by wanting to call up some of her alchemist friends to aid them in their cause. The more the merrier! :) Ya know, I never gave it much thought; but, when Raine said that the military wasn't the only organization that had alchemists in its ranks, I suddenly realized how true that statement actually is! She's an alchemist and Russell and Fletcher Tringham are too. Lord knows how many there really are. I have little doubt that most of them would love to see the fuhrer overthrown and peace restored to Amestris! :)

I'm surprised that you somehow manage to like Archer. That amazes me. How? He's a totally ass! Is it because he seems to be at death's door? How in God's name he survived that blast losing literally half of himself is beyond me. By all rights he should be dead but somehow he isn't. unbelieveable. Such is the power of alchemy I guess. :) It kinda worries me that Ed has made a deal with the homunculi. But, then again, homunculi always worry me! :D There is no way to make them human without using the Philosopher's Stone and thereby risking destroying Al is there? *sigh* Like I said, worrisome. Ed does not need to complication of dealing with homunculi with it being so close to time for the babies to come. *big silly grin* I can't wait for those two little angels to be born!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

ooooooo, interesting!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!! this story RULES!!!!!! keep up the good work hon! later! ^-^