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OMG! are they going to be okay! i was practically crying by the end. silly me but i am worried about them! T.T please will they be okay?

Is it just me or did you really make the Ed-kills-Sloth part longer? Me confused...I just had to read that chapter again, it was soo good. Maybe my mind was playing tricks on me. Anaway again, luv this one!!

;;_;; OMG CLIFFHANGER!!!! I AM ENTRHALLED!

WOOT! nice! I'm biting my nails waiting for the next chapter. Have mercy and update before I eat my hands! ^-^

Oh no Ed! It's not Lyra, it's Dante! And she wants little Aideen!...*understands they can't hear me* *sighs*
Wonderful chapter, I nearly fell from my chair, and my jaw dropped, when Lyra appeared. Good thing Ed has two women watching over him. Again, I love the way Wrath is in this fic, helping the good-guys.

I am soo touched to hear I can be thanked that we fans get to read more of your work in the future. There goes my ego again... :)
When I read Memoirs of a Geisha, a critic wrote that it was the kind of book that shouldn't have had an ending. I think your fic is that good, that I don't want it to end and each week read a few new chapters. I have to go buy tissues for the day there wil be a 'The End' on the bottom of a chapter. How I dread that day....but I am soooo happy to hear there mih be a sequel! Yay! Luv ya hun!

I am so honoured. And the blame is all mine ;) but everybody loves your fic so no worry hun!
Great chapter, you summarized the important parts but I would have wanted Ed killng Sloth to be a little longer :'( I love that scene in the anime. But the chapter in whole was good. I have to say, at one point, I couldn't hate Archer anymore. I just couldn't. I mean, he is going towards his death (not knowing, not caring) and when Roy warned him I felt some jealousy and hurt comming from the other Colonel. No I am waiting to see if you mkae him the ultimate bad-guy or the kind we will feel sorry for. Cause I really am feeling sorry for him :/

That was a fast update. No hurry....I never want this fic to end!

My reviews are so short! Meh. I like how you intergrated canon into the story, managed to get everyone in there. I'm sorry it's ending, but I am loking forward to it too. I'm such a curious thing.

I almost hate you for leaving it there. Damn cliffhangers and deceptive endings.
But, for the rest of it, I offer myself as your personal uke-whore. I'll just bounce in my seat in wait for whatever you have next.
Much love (for a price). *chu*

Tense doesn't even begin to describe how things are! WOW! Nerve-racking white knuckled panic attack is more like it!! LOL!! Just reading your story has made me remember why I fell in love with Fullmetal Alchemist to begin with. It's the drama baby! (baby. jeez. I sound like Raine now! :D) Speaking of Raine, I never got the impression that Roy was all that pushy and demanding. Determined as hell to get what he wants (the position of fuhrer for example) but not demanding. If he was, I don't think his troops would be as loyal to or trusting of him as they are. But, that's just my two cents! :) There has to be more people than just me picking up on the Havoc/Gracia thing. It's kinda obvious. ;) I just love how well you've blended the canon with your fiction. It all flows so seamlessly. I've been trying to remember who killed which homunculus. I know Ed destroyed Greed and Sloth. Wrath, Envy, and Gluttony aren't killed in the anime and Pride is taken out by Roy right? I can't remember who got rid of Lust. Was it Scar? Damn! I hate it when I can't remember stuff!! I'll probably remember who after I submit this review! :D Anyway, the end of the chapter with the red light engulfing our heroes was one hell of a cliffhanger! Even tho we all know it's not the end of them I still hate cliffhangers!! grr! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

du-ude... no. that was... no. but... such an awesome chapter!! especially the end, but no! they got caught in the red light! but i know they don't die. so who saves them... or maybe, what? anyway, i can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!