rate_review Reviews

I read the first one and loved it and read this one and also loved it! I honestly can't say which I like more, they're both spectacular! I'm very much looking forward to the sequel of this one, having already read the other. ^_^ Thanks so much for such a great read!

Shit, this fic of yours must be one of the best I've ever read and one of the funniest too! I absolutely fell in love with it, cos it was that good and so beautiful yet sad.

I loved everything from the plot (which was very original I think and that's a good thing), to the portrayal of the characters to your writing style. I also think you did a very good job with the whole MPreg thing considering it was your first time! And the smutty scenes were all amazing and so were all of the other scenes as well!

Even though it was my second reading about MPregs and I must admit it was more than a little bit weird to read about both Envy and Ed being pregnant (but I did overcome that pretty quickly, so never mind, haha!), furthermore my heart almost broke when Envy lost the baby, it was so sad and especially more so when Ed died! But I still loved the whole fic, so...

Kudos on writing a brilliant story!

I really hope Envy'll find Ed again, btw in the last chapters AN: you wrote something abot a sequel, where is it?! Cos I want to read it (if you ever wrote one that is), desperately, hehe!

Anyway thatnks for sharing.

i know what you mean about the profiles book i was just looking at it in the bookstore today.......thats the one from the anime though 'cause right beside it there was a profiles book from the manga written by and in it it states that envy is a character of questionable gender because of his shape shifting abilities. but if you've seen the wholes series or even read far enough in the manga you understand that the androgynous form that envy prefers is still not his true form........his true form is a somewhat older and slightly ridiculous version of ed........with curly hair..........so stating that envy is female is ludicrous......just goes to show how badly anime is butchered when it is brought to North America and so many crucial details are lost in translation.......*sigh* well as for the story i loved it! it made me cry! i loved how IC everyone was lol i generally prefer happy stories but its nice when sad ones are so moving. good job! ^.^

That was so sweet and so sad. Very nice.

ooooh! Plot! I'm luvin it! Can't wait to find out what Envy has planned... I like the way you changed this from the first one you posted. Much more deep and involved. ^__^ The other was very light hearted and fluffy (which I love) but this one really sucks the reader in! Great job!

awww. poor envy. well i kinda figured that would happen but i had hoped i was gonna be wrong. eagerly looking foward to your next update.

*sniffles and sobs* That was so sad!!! Poor everyone! You, my dear, are evil. And I love you twice as much for it! T__T

*sporfle!* That last part was freaking hysterical! I love how Ed & Envy fight all the time and Cain has to play moderator! ROFLMAO!! ^__^

I love your wonderful twists! *snickers* They sure are fate's bitches, aren't they? ^__^

More! More! XD

*snickers* I can't imagine the mood swings Envy would have. *groans* They're bad enough when s/he's not pregnant. *pats Ed* He needs a break! ^__^

Poor Havoc & Fuery! They're in for it now!!! *chuckles*