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for Where There's Smoke....

by Metranome

schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very well done; I liked how Kimblee thought he was helping in his own mad way, and how Roy wasn't entirely protesting. Evil with good intentions, and you showed it very well.
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was very believable, from Kimblee's perspective. I really think he would be the type to have a thing for screaming, feeling that as something raw and pure. Though a little darker than some I read, I liked it and that you were able to make the characters as realistic as you did.
person Kimblee18
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn, I wanted to be the first review! *shakes fist at broken computer* Anyway...thank you, Met!!! I love my fic sooooo much, especially the hints of MaesxRoy *winks* And don't worry, you did an exception job of writing Kimblee, it flowed very well and dub-con rocks! XD I heart you, and thanks again! *kisses, hugs and yaoi*
person Kimblee18
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*exceptional

I can't spell tonight! XD But then again, you knew that already. hehe *hearts*
person Kuragari
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, I'll be the first to admit that I really don't like Kimblee and normally shun from stories with him in it.... but I started reading this out of curiosity and well, Danm it! you snagged me! ^-^ nice writting and I agree with you on the whole "he wasn't COMPLETELY insane before prison" thing. GOOD JOB!
person TrulyWished
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, nice details and smooth descriptions.
person Hikaru!
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED your Kimblee! He's sucha creepy psycho. As for your footnote, that's what i've always thought too, no one starts out completely crazy, it takes a massive event to tip the scales, though a family history of it helps too. Wonderful writing and the description was great. *is so OMG for Roy*
person rikkimeko
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! OMFG!OMFG! I LOVED THE STORY! I always loved Kimbley because he's such a evil playful bastard! And a part of me wanted to see Roy get hurt! I loved it for a moment, I thought you was kimbley and roy. The impressions were good. PLEASE WRITE MORE KIMBLEY/ROY NC stories! I also know good pics of roy and kimbley. Email me if you want to know!!!

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