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for What Could Be

by freewater

person PeekaPika
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Good emotional interplay between characters; it seemed realistic. I love stories that show the characters growing. Glad you gave it the happy ending, with Gohan, I think that is actually the more probable outcome - he is smart enough to know when he's not getting the whole story. Also, I think he would be willing/wanting to give Trunks a second chance anyway. Thanks so much for writing this!
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never really liked Goten. Don't know why..Trunks is m all time favorite DBZ chariture, so ANY story with him in it while he DOESN'T end up with Goten makes me smile. Plus this one was cute.
person Foxxy Jones
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool another story(new to me at least)! This nice long and jus terrific. Truhan forever!
person TheRedeemer
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! It's not often I find fics where Gohan is more kind, honest, and loving than Goten is. I have to admit I almost skipped the rest of the fic when Goten started acting like an out-of-character evil rat-bastard, but I'm glad I stuck with it. And the happy ending choice?... PERFECT!

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