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for Enough Time

by sefiru

schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your stories in the "Pure Evil" universe are some of my favorite DBZ fiction on this site. Since you aren't planning on writing any more "pure evil" because of villain deficiency, perhaps a sequel to "Enough Time"...? Or a ficlet about Raditz and his chibis. ^__^
person pun_xy
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a cute ending! And of course Kakarott's gonna accept her, he's da man after all and overall a very nice chum ^^ Veggie still rocks though and Mirai will always be one of the top guys. All heil the King!
person kitkit
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me love especially the joke from vegeta about nice melons, what a perv
person kitkit
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i can imagine what kakarott will say, its not going to be pretty....chi-chi is really lucky, she's family otherwise gohan would have hurt her.
person pun_xy
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that woman, ChiChi's an idiot XP and Satan too.
Whoop! Go Mirai!
person pun_xy
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great that you actually spent time on these portals ^^ Makes them feel real, sorta.
And that Goth-girl can go bury herself, if Mirai has to be het Shiso is all the woman he needs. Boo on Gothie! But kinda fun she won't give up XD
person kitkit
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow goth girl is back this should be fun
person pun_xy
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, cute baby! Gohan's all protective and stuff, also cute ^^
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Frieza is a dickhead and this story is great. Yea, being a mid-wife with a highly protective, massively strong father-to-be standing around would be a little stressful. Yet again, Chichi ruins the moment. I'm beginning to wonder if that might be her secret power or something. I really liked that little cheer that the chibis did. I always did think it was weird the way that Kakarot treated that four-star ball and Mirai had this freaked out look almost constantly in the series.
person Robyn
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D Happy little hunting scene. I liked all the descriptions of what they were doing, and how their prey would react.

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