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Aww, protecting his mate, how adorable!
And Pan being born *squeals*

Yay, you updated this! Happy, happy, joy, joy!! There isn't much I have to say about this chapter. I do wonder about the time frame of this story compared to Pure Evil 4. Did this happen before, during, or after that story?

I don't get around the visiting the het section all that often. I knew you had started this story, I just didn't know HOW FAR ALONG it was.

This is most excellent! I loved the scene where Miria went to the club the first time, and had to deal with all the posers. That was funny.

I like what you have Miria doing in order to make money. I think it makes perfect sense for him.

Excellent job so far, and I am sorry I didn't get into this sooner!

Catatonic? Me? Neveeer ^^
Poor Gohan to have Chichi as a mother, though I have to say he's dealing with her in a very grown-up, Goku-look-alike way. Go Gohan! XD

Gaah! My eyes, my eyes! Nah, I'm kiddin, it was real good ^^ I like Shiso, she's a determined woman, good for Mirai's het self ^^

Actually, as much as I like yaoi, het isn't that bad. I guess I take whatever I can get. I still think a Bardock spin off would be great. I can just see him and Vegeta-jii. Someone should get that cranky royal to loosen up and if Kaky can do for Vegeta there is no reason their dads can't get together. I liked the parrot a lot. I can't wait to see how the other saiyan girls react to this!! Anyway, loved the fic as always and can't wait for more.

Hmm, smart and beautiful women planning, really devious that one ^^ And Mirai got the point, yay, I'm happy for him! (though a bit sad because he's so good in slash, your story is the only Het I'm read, isn't that nice of me XD)

oohh i guess shiso is mirai's now.

Gohan isn't a dork! YAY! I usually don't do het very much, but since Chi-chi is nowhere to be seen, I like it. Chi-chi is usually my biggest peeve when it comes to DBZ, whether it be the show or a fan story. Once again, Vegeta-jii is stupid and hilarious at the same time. I figure its only a matter of time before Vegeta-jii is playing golf with the Namecks. I mean their entire planet is like one big golf course. They should turn it into a golf resort. I can see it now Muuri the Nameck Elder versus Vegeta-jii to determine the greatest golfer in the universe. When are we going to see more of Bardock? He is back by now, right? Mirai vs. Bardock in a sarcasm match up of all time. It'll be cool to see Bardock go gold. Not to add to your work load, but a side story for Bardock would be cool. Just what was meant by that "royal guards" comment in Pure Evil 3? Anyway, just more greatness from you, as usual. Many thanks for the update and I can't wait for more. No really, I can't! I'm just horribly impatient like that.;P

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