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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!
This is totally going on my recommended reading. I'm so happy I discovered you!! Keep up the amazing work!! Woo woo!!
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!
This is totally going on my recommended reading. I'm so happy I discovered you!! Keep up the amazing work!! Woo woo!!
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story was another masterpiece, i went through so many emotions while reading it but i loved it, it was addictive and interesting!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
While reading this I became more obssessed about what would happen between
Valeri and Goku rather than Goku and Vegeta *shurgs*. I would not have minded
if it had ended up as GxVa pairing in the end. NEway, I loved this; a very
enjoable read!
Valeri and Goku rather than Goku and Vegeta *shurgs*. I would not have minded
if it had ended up as GxVa pairing in the end. NEway, I loved this; a very
enjoable read!
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! ^^ that was sooo great!!! i laughed, i cried and i got heart attackes. YEEEEEEAH!!!! :D
i´m just jelous, that you can write like this, you know?! ^^ no, i really am, it´s so unfair!
^^ god, i was a bit worried about goku and velari. but sentence by sentence,
i began to like them, as a pairing.
weird. because i LOVE Goku x Vegeta together. but velari...well, he´s
$%&"§$ sexy and as georgous as vegeta, only a little bit taller than his brother.
i really like the way you painted velaris portrait. cool, funny, sexy mixed up with a nice touch of sarcasm. :) and even if he seems to have a "little wine problem" XD , or maybe because of that i felt sympathy for him. he´s a nice and also very interesting character, with endless charm! *grins*
but i was happy, when vegeta finally decided, not to block the bound anymore.
what a stubborn "§$%&(.
well yah i can say, i really was relieved,
even if i felt a bit pitty for velari. okay. but not for long. ^-^ and the most adorable and cutest and idonotknowanybetterwords- thing was, that vegeta cared so much about goku, after he was cathaonic.
i mean, to me it was very important to read that, because at this point it is already clear to me, that it isn´t "only" the bound, but love. even if everything started with the bound and a
promise, between the two kings. ^^ oh! i almost forgot juaoda! *smirks* uuuhhh, i wanna have such a strange
killer-kittey either! that was a sooo cute and creative idea! and funny!!! XD what´s more, i was very fascinated by bardocks charcter. he was so....sensitive and ( okay, i have to confess, that i remembered your last bardock, who was like a overmotivated mother to kakarott, with not much brain inside and so on... ^O^ )
but respect for that!!! because you´ve shown a totally other perpective of bardock. actually a "yes i really believe, that this could have been kakarotts father"- portrait, of bardock. yap.
ummm, well, i really could write much more about your story now,
but i think a AWESOME !!! and GREAT !!! - will do it either, will it? i think so. ^-^
Keep on writing, please!!!!
bye :)
i´m just jelous, that you can write like this, you know?! ^^ no, i really am, it´s so unfair!
^^ god, i was a bit worried about goku and velari. but sentence by sentence,
i began to like them, as a pairing.
weird. because i LOVE Goku x Vegeta together. but velari...well, he´s
$%&"§$ sexy and as georgous as vegeta, only a little bit taller than his brother.
i really like the way you painted velaris portrait. cool, funny, sexy mixed up with a nice touch of sarcasm. :) and even if he seems to have a "little wine problem" XD , or maybe because of that i felt sympathy for him. he´s a nice and also very interesting character, with endless charm! *grins*
but i was happy, when vegeta finally decided, not to block the bound anymore.
what a stubborn "§$%&(.
well yah i can say, i really was relieved,
even if i felt a bit pitty for velari. okay. but not for long. ^-^ and the most adorable and cutest and idonotknowanybetterwords- thing was, that vegeta cared so much about goku, after he was cathaonic.
i mean, to me it was very important to read that, because at this point it is already clear to me, that it isn´t "only" the bound, but love. even if everything started with the bound and a
promise, between the two kings. ^^ oh! i almost forgot juaoda! *smirks* uuuhhh, i wanna have such a strange
killer-kittey either! that was a sooo cute and creative idea! and funny!!! XD what´s more, i was very fascinated by bardocks charcter. he was so....sensitive and ( okay, i have to confess, that i remembered your last bardock, who was like a overmotivated mother to kakarott, with not much brain inside and so on... ^O^ )
but respect for that!!! because you´ve shown a totally other perpective of bardock. actually a "yes i really believe, that this could have been kakarotts father"- portrait, of bardock. yap.
ummm, well, i really could write much more about your story now,
but i think a AWESOME !!! and GREAT !!! - will do it either, will it? i think so. ^-^
Keep on writing, please!!!!
bye :)
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! That was a great ending. Truly a great overall story, I'm a bit sad that it's over. Sorry for the late review and all, but the computer problem still exists. Well, I'm going to read dragons and yaoi right after this so await another review.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
got to love it..im so sad that its over
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finaly!!!!! That was incredible and Goku was soooooo cute with all the blushing! Ok, moment of complete gayness over. I'm aloud to be somewhat girlish smetimes right? anyways the chapter was amazing, I loved it! and you are right... I probly would never let them out of bed... well Vegeta I wouldn't... Goku would prolly get on my nerves after a few rounds XD! No I haven't got the chance to look into " Death Note" at all. you see, I'm currently living off of my roomates laptop, and she uses it a lot... Chiropractors (rolls eyes).
My story, well I've been writing it on and off again, I'll have to find a disk or something to load it from my computer to this piece of crap... I miss my computer having the web. I've gotten pretty far on it. It's not going through the reverie thing... well if you remember i had my characters kill everyone and then did a flashback thing. So anyways I'm finished with writng about what happened and now I'm writing about what's going to happen... as if you didn't guess that. I think its a good ebough story. It makes me smile! Yes, I will let you beta or watever you want to do wth it. Why wouldn't i let one of my favorite writers beat the shit out of me? :) Hahaha
Great chapter and I will try to get my stuff to you.
Gucie
My story, well I've been writing it on and off again, I'll have to find a disk or something to load it from my computer to this piece of crap... I miss my computer having the web. I've gotten pretty far on it. It's not going through the reverie thing... well if you remember i had my characters kill everyone and then did a flashback thing. So anyways I'm finished with writng about what happened and now I'm writing about what's going to happen... as if you didn't guess that. I think its a good ebough story. It makes me smile! Yes, I will let you beta or watever you want to do wth it. Why wouldn't i let one of my favorite writers beat the shit out of me? :) Hahaha
Great chapter and I will try to get my stuff to you.
Gucie
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Vegeta and Kakarott really furthered their bond with recent actions. I think this trip did them good. :)
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow me love it was very hot
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, now you have done it.
I´m addicted. So you have to live with the consequences, you have to give me more stuff. And please a little bit of steamy sex. That would be nice.
PRETTY PLEASE
P.S. Now Velari is acting a little weird, ne? To annoy Vegeta that much is like he is having a strong death wish or something. But it didn´t look like he´s warming up to Bardock. So will he really go with Bardock to Hetela only to stay out of harm´s way? But if he do you have scenes on two different planets and the protagonists can´t interact with each other anymore, only through `interplanetary call`s´, that could be difficult, right?
I´m addicted. So you have to live with the consequences, you have to give me more stuff. And please a little bit of steamy sex. That would be nice.
PRETTY PLEASE
P.S. Now Velari is acting a little weird, ne? To annoy Vegeta that much is like he is having a strong death wish or something. But it didn´t look like he´s warming up to Bardock. So will he really go with Bardock to Hetela only to stay out of harm´s way? But if he do you have scenes on two different planets and the protagonists can´t interact with each other anymore, only through `interplanetary call`s´, that could be difficult, right?