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who the hell cares about you being shy Kak. Vegeta has a great ass, get over it! Ok sorry... but I'd been in vegeta's bed in no time.... huh. Shows how much depth I have. Hehehehe, I'm glad you past the exam easily. Lounging around the house doing nothing sounds like it could be fun, I'd probly just read the whole time. Naruto... hmmmm, I like it and then it gets stupid. I haven't had the chance to read the manga so I have to stik with the american version of the show on cartton network... in other words, no swear words, minimal blood (they do show a lot still), hints towards kakashi's book are chopped off... well it's made for kids here. We're at the point where they are looking for Tsuande... she needs to hurry up and teach Sakura some crap because the weak Sakura is annoying... very annoying. Then she breaks mountains down with one punch... very weird. I'm not to familiar witht the anime you were talking about, the one you downloaded. Is it any good? Wow, this review turned into an email, sorry. Much luck in writing and such.

Guice

OH my favortie line in any book: “Yep,” the king sighed. “All my life I was afraid of that – Vegeta found his other half.”-- That was the best thing in the entire world!

Man, i wonder where it's going now, time to build on the relationship itself- and time for some Bardock/Velari- Sweet!

love it..im glad kakarott sees his mistake in running, and i have to admit a angrey kakarott is sexy

Ahahaha Kakarott ordering everyone around, I love it! And King Vegeta is the man lol.

ok now what is poor goku going to have to go through
lol... I love this story. Update soon please.

I'm up to your latest chapter. The character development fuels my interest more. I wonder if Vegeta will go to Hetela too. Keep it coming. :)

GOD!!!! THE CAVITIES!!!!! No I'm joking, it was a great chpater. Of course I will have to tell you my favorite part. It had to be when Bardock and Kak..... Goku were in the shop and vegeta is oblivious to Goku's fear of Hospitals. idk... i did the chibi character replacement thing. God, I don't know how to talk right now. Gah..... psh, delicate flower... I did laugh at that a bit. when I read that I invisioned you beating the crap out of your computer teacher... hehehehe, that made it even better. OH WELL, it was a great chapter and I hope life is going great for ya.

Guice

man kakarot just can't make up his mind can he? sometimes i think barock is just douce but sometimes he's ok, anywho...can't wait for more.

Oh My GOSH!!!! So I didn't see that coming!!!! DUH, where else to go whenyou're trying to get away from your mate but home? No where! Ahhh, i love it, I can't wait to read the next chapter

wow i love this chapter, it was so funny with the doctor's thinking kakarott was insane