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what more are you going to put the poor man through.
I love the story though. keep up the good work.

Heh, great chapter. Half way threw when they were making out in the cave I was like "tht liar!" and I was going o write an emial to you saying what a tease you were but NOOOOO! Have to be miss truthful and havve no desire to write about cave sex. I suppose the kitchen banter was my favorite part of the chapter all the Jaron stuff. Did you get his name from your screen name? the reason I ask is that they're are almost the same savve a few letters, but oh well. HAVE A GREAT DAY!!!!... or night!!!! watever the hell time it is in your location!!!!

guice

Hi again
Yes, but I hate it when mom was right, right?
I like the new turn of events in the last chapter, Kakarott allways jump out of the frying pan and into the fire. That´s so funny. Ok, Kakarott is not so lucky at the moment but he will make it, otherwise it would be the end of the story, ne? And I like to see how Vegeta helps Kakarott through it.
So I wait for the next chappi.
kuroineko

oh yay, kakarot finally believes vegeta. man that was some drama, im glad kakarot is still standing up for himself though, he shouldn't let vegeta run over him.

wow i love this chapter

Great chapie!!!!!!!!
Kakarott on the run! NICE!!!!
Vegeta will have a hard time to convince Kakarott that he ´s not his enemy.
Somehow I find the agedifference between Bardock and Velari a bit disturbing, it reminds me of Anna Nicole Smith, eeeerkkk.
Of course it wouldn´t look like it with Sayans, they don´t age as humans.
But I allways think that if nothing unnatural happens the older one of such a couple will die first and the younger on will remain suffering for a long time. Of course there can allways be an accident and such, but the chances for an equel aged couple are far better.
But like my mother used to say 'love don´t choose wisely'.
I can´t await the next chapie.

I want a dathi. And yay, finally some Veggy/Kaka cuddle time I hope soon?

wow i can't wait for the next chapter

Hahaha, Yeah I guess I do turn everything into a comedy. Things seem better when you get to smile at it. Anyways on with the review.

It was great! Heh, I did get to laugh at drunken Velari a bit. I suppose that was my afvorite part. All of the gaurds coming in to see a dishevled Velari and a distraught and angry Bardock. Then Bardock laid down the law and told Velari to get sober. Hehehe, defeated characters are always the best.

Then Goku goes beserkish and flees. So do we get to see some cave sex? Cuz everyone loves some great cave sex, especially after your all bloody and tried for the best part of an hour to do something with a horn... or mebe thats just me.

Great job witht he chapter.

Guice

i knew he'd wake up soon! anyway, this was good though it seemed short. i can't believe that kakarot still thinks vegeta wants to kill him. but i guess since he HAS been catatonic the last few days....oh well.