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I love this fic more and more. Its just so well written. You also update at fairly good pace, which is such a good thing.

Chapter 11

I like how you show this side of Velari. He really got himself into another mess.

Kakarott on the other hand... I wonder how he will react to Vegeta this time around. I have a guess, but I look forward to the next chapter. :)

god i love the dathi she makes this chapter so funny by bringing the rabbit to kakarott

i love the dathi, i think if they were real i'd want one! poor kakarot is getting fed fresh rabbits. its so great, poor vegeta should love the animal more, she's pretty freakin wonderful. and its good that kakrot is showing more alertness, maybe he'll wake up soon.

Ahh! I'm loving it even more now.

I don't know why or what happened but everytime i tried to leave a review on the last one it wouldn't let me so here's what i remember: Something about the chapter not being boring- i thought it was necessary and i loved it-- for this chapter, oh of course i loved it, it's odd, Kakarot, who is very respondent, not responding and instead Vegeta having to be the talkative one. He's very resourceul and intelligent too, and so caring- well.... it is his mate, huh, it slides.. i enjoyed it. I'm glad to finally know exactly hw the bardock/ Velari thing began, now i shall be patient once more to see how Kakarot is when he comes back from catatonicy and if Velari accepts Bardocks offer, which would just be... stupendous

Awesome, awesome, awesome!!

That was amazing. I love the Jouda, he's now my favorite. The Bardock/Velari interaction was really cute. Yet again the chibi figures come to mind and I see them on a bench. Velari being 1/5 his normal size and beat red and Bardock just babbling on. Hehehe, good times.

I was wondering if you got my email, I sent it a couple of days ago, if not no prob.

Guice

Hi,
I like the new chappi, and the dathi.
I love cats, but you only said she is a huge catlike creature. I can´t make a real picture of her, so I want to know how big she is? The size of a leopard or a tiger, and what is her coulor, had she stripes or points?
The very attentive Vegeta is sooooooo cute! Maybe he must start to purr too to get a response from Kakarott, ne? ^.^

kuroineko

I've been reading all your stories for a while now and I can't wait to read the rest of this!

Chapter 9

I liked this chapter immensely. We get more of a look into the feelings of both Bardock and Vegeta. The elder prince must now realize, to some degree, the responsibly he must take with Kakarott. I like the hint you give the reader about whom holds Bardock's affections.

I await the next chapter. :-)

wow another chapter and a look into bardock life