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I WANT A JOUDA!!!! That thing sounds so freaking awesome, all devious like. Oh yeah the review... well, to be honest. It was kinda boring, I mean we got information and backround stories (Poor Bardock) but i really didn't find anything great that stood out... except the cat thing... that thing rules.

Another thing is the he/she thing. I know you previously discussed this with another reader, but its important. I understand why you want to repeatedly use their names but it makes things harder to understand. Like Bardock's late mate, I didn't know that he was male until the end of Bardock's tale... thouh the word misuu probly takes care of that cuz I don't know if it's a real word or not, but please take it into consideration. It will make the story much better, thus making it perfect.

I hope I'm not being mean, but hey, opinions. What can you do.

Yeah the family stuff... good times. Fighting over the remote was a big thing, cartoons or MTV (music television). Oh I have one brother and two sisters... but I consider one sister as a brother... she's a bit butch XD. Well I hope life is going great for you. I have something that I need to send to you, you'll laugh your ass off.

Guice

i like this cat thing...she seems pretty great! haha, poor bardock is getting over his hostility towards vegeta i think...great chapter!!!

Aww, I enjoyed the Vegeta/Bardock bonding time ^^. Made me feel all warm and fuzzy. And that dathi sounds like a cool pet to have. Anyway, nice chapter.

Hello again.
Vegeta coddling Kakarott that´s great!!!
And about the love triangle, I think it is not the same when it is with a brother.
I heared there are people somewhere in the Fare East, the people there are very poor and there are more men then women and if a man wants to marry he has to pay a high brideprice, so the man put his money together with his brothers or brother, therefore the women marry not only this man but 'unofficialy' the brother as well. And if there will be children it is not importend who is the real father is. For them it is normal that a women is married to one man but lived togethere with two or more.
Somehow I like the thought.
And genetical there are not so much difference between brothers, so I think it is not as bad as it would be with some stranger. At least is would stay in the family. ^_^

kuroineko

Well now is seems we are over one mountain. I get the feeling there is another coming. Anyway I really like how Vegeta is finally doing what he can to mend the current situation with Kakarott. Great job.

Awr damn. Now you made me all mushy. It's so relieving to see Vegeta finally admitting he cares for Kakarott. I still would like to see him punished for what he did though, I think Velari went too easy on him. *laughs* What you said about love triangles and the reluctance concerning anyone come between the main pairing, you're so right. However, though I am an avid Vegeta/Kakarott-fan, I love what you do with Velari and how you build this all up. It's really beautiful. As for Xe.. heh, you might be pleased then to hear that she just recommended your story on her lj. *smiles* http://xero-sky.livejournal.com/

Yay new chapter! I'm so glad Vegeta is finally coming to his senses. About Velari, personally I love the character and I'm very happy with how you've included him so far. I hope you keep up the little triangle between them for as long as you can, it makes things much more interesting ^^.

YAY!! Finally, Vegeta got to say his peace and do what he need to do- SWEET! hm, is bardock going to get with Velari because he believes he's the better man of the family? sorry, i can't help but speculate on the situation. I love this and I'm SO happy with what's going on at the moment, i cannot wait for the next chapter to come out! HURRY

man this story makes me feel sorry for kakarott

Awwwwwwww, Vegeta wants some ass... how sweet. I always like the little fights the brothers have, makes me miss home. Well, we never kneed eachother in the balls but the fights did get intense.

I really enjoyed Bardocks segments. I can see his eyes all wide with anger waving a lil' chibi fist in the air telling Vegeta to watch it... good times. This chapter was good, but Vegeta liking Kakarott(sp) happened a little to fast for me... but then again I was probly hoping you would just make Velari run away with goku. Which brings me to my next subject, I forgot who it was but someone said they hated velari because he was a dick or something and Vegeta was the good one (pre-Vegeta liking Goku) I fumed. their opinion though, Just watch out for some people, they may flame him loads upon loads.

Well i got to go. My email should be on its way. Have fun doing work XD!

guice