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Hahahahahahaha, heh, i actually meant to type "ho", which is like a slut or whore, but was just kidding lol (for the most part) that was my mistake- sorry to cause all the trouble! And ah yes, i will say i loved this chapter, i love this story, you do a good job of the whole missunderstanding, misinterpretation thing- i find it beautiful, compelling, controversal and interesting. I can't wait till Vegeta's fat assed self just gives in to Kakarrot. *sigh* Tell your beta to hurry up!

ooh another chapter dam vegeta and being so dam stuborn! hope you update soon
BC xx

Chapter 6

I loved this chapter. I hope Vegeta helps Kakarott soon. That dream was interesting. And Vegeta's reaction at the dinner table was pricess- running away. lol

I look forward to your next chapter.

Nice Chappy. To answer a early question, a hoe...ho watever, its an american term for whore but with a lighter meaning. Back to teh review. The begining threw me off, but I guess thats what it was supposed to do. damn sx dreams. I laughed at Kak overreacting to everything and then the f-bomb started dropping nd it just made me smile. I was imagining King Vegeta's face the whole time and it looked priceless. I really enjoyed the chapter. Now the things I got away with... well, I think I might keep that a secret 0_o.

Hi chayron.
I reeeeeeeeally love your new story. Not that I didn´t love the other ones as well, I adore them all.
Whatever, the last events in 'Heavy Bond' are very intriguing. I can´t wait to see what´s going to happen.
Will Kakarott in the end accept the deal and sleep with this Jaron or maybe he ended in Velari´s bed? Or will Vegeta come to the rescue?
Poor Kakarott, abandon on a forein planet and nobody to trust.
Oh, that´s gonna be interresting!
At the moment I think Vegeta is a bastard and doesn´t deserve Kakarott. I would like to see that Kakarott get´s stronger and beat the hell out of Vegeta, maybe turn supersaiyan? That would be a nice surprise for that conceited prince, who´s asking for his ass to get whipped, don´t you think?
But whatever will be, I hope it will be soon! (Making a baby perhaps, or at least steaming SEX?)
Am I be too pushy????
Sorry, don´t be mad at me, pleeeeease? ^^,!!!

kuroineko

Yay! I love this story more and more with each chapter. Yikes, so now Kakarotto is going into heat, eh? Interesting...

can't wait for an update! very good story i love au's
BC xx

oh my gosh, graaa! you kill me sometimes, such angst, such emotions, i have a hard time waiting- (such impatience) ;p but i suppose i will, seeing as how i have to.

ahh I'm so glad I was right- Velari's a hoe!

Wonderful chapter, just wonderful

wow nice chapter though kakarott needs to find someone to spend his heat with.

And the plot thickens. Very nice ending to the chapter. Velari is a crafty one isn't he, though I wouldn't mind what he was trying to do at all.... but then agian thats me and my life isn't being threatened. Anyways overall it was amazing, as always.

Good to hear you didn't have sourses that week and no bodies were found. Yes, the gay package. I hope you didn't take that in wrong context. I met the many things that you can get away with or do while being gay. Though, there are several cons. Well, great chapter and all. Can't wait till the next installment. Your country friend, Guice