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wow this story is amazing I rely love it <3, I dunno how do you do to make them in character even in a AU. just one question. will be smut(sex) in the next chapter?

ooooh interesting can't wait for the next update!
BC xx

Chapter 4

Wow the rapport between Velari and Kakarott, is nice. Something to bridge the gulf between Vegeta and his mate. Everything was well described, and I could visualize the scenes clearly. Great job!

wow vegeta attacked kakarott..now kakarott is really going to think vegeta wants to kill him.

Oh My GOSH! I loved this chapter, loved it! we're getting somehwere- sweet!

Lol, was I right?

Ahh, i'm even more excited about this than i was before, fabulous! *sighs* Yes well, that would make sense, that Velari isn't perfect, and i just thought I'd say that your desription of him suprised me very much.. i don't know, i thought he was the shorter slimmer... just all around "chibi" young version of Vegeta but nooooo he's bulkier and taller, damn. You got me there, feel good about yourself, lol

Again, great chapter, great story, come on with the next one

Verrrry nice. Rather enjoyed the teeth thing. I don't know what it was about it, I guess just the whole act of independence and not acting as some spoiled rich person... although he was rich on Hetela and is still rich... lucky bastard. The ending to this chapter was exciting. Everyone likes a Vegeta who takes his anger for one person out on another, makes for a great explanation speech. Well I hope life treats you well my friend and I'm glad you think my fantasy was interesting. I just have random thoughts, comes with the gay package I guess. Have fun with with the computers and don't have blunt objects around you, it always ends horribly.

Another great chapter :) It makes me wonder if Vegeta will ever come around though. At this point I'm liking his brother better, lol.

Hahaahah, you crack me up girl. I just think that it's too early in the story to make any assessments that's all, i like them all, but you can see how Velari would be tthe most, or one of the most, likable characters. I will, however, say that I'm thinking Goku is assuming a bit much, understandable in his position, and Vegeta, well, he's Vegeta. I am enjoying it, and i can't wait to see where the hell this story is going.

Is Bardock gonna get with Velari or something?

love it

Wow! Great chapter; now I wonder if this is going to be a goku/Velari fic.