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Wow, poor Al...and poor Ed too, in a way. When Ed wakes up and realizes that he hurt his brother he will not be very happy. And I don't know how Al is going to recover from that, either!

Do you write fanfic also in Japanese? If so, I'd be interested in reading them.

Whoa, noncon Elricest... so what's wrong with Ed here? Is he really just tired, or is he having some sort of delusions? I'm rather concerned for poor Al...especially since Alfons and Alphonse sound the same, he probably has no clue what is happening at all. And kudos to you for writing in your non-native language! What do you usually write in?

Uh oh, confusion. Poor Ed, he's so delicate really.

You know, I can honestly say I have never seen a fic in which Ed is interested in Al because he misses Hei. That is something new and very, very appealing to me! Why is Ed so spaced out? Is he depressed, delusional, etc... I am definitely interested to see where this is going. Inquiring minds want to know!

CONTINUE!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!

hmm, sounds intresting ;D can't wait till the next chapter is up!