rate_review Reviews

*happy sigh* This is how it should be. I think you've written the perfect, completely in character, Goku and Piccolo story. They are such a perfect match for each other. You have Piccolo's voice sounding so true. *loves this story some more*

That was absolutely perfect. I can't say much more than that. This will be marked as one of my all time favorite DBZ fics, and I love you for writing it ^.^

Your email is hidden... Can you contact me at pixelgoddess@likeacat.com? I'd like to post this on my site, and I've recommended that Ginia post it at the Saiyan Hideaway.

Hi Ginia from Saiyan HideAway here. Your story came highly recomended - and I have enjoyed this first little bit of it... on to more.

I absolutely love your story!! I think the flow and language is perfect and you have just the right amount of details to really make this story visual to the mind's eye!!
I also love the fact that Piccolo is ticklish, that is really hot and I really hope you include this feature more in you later chapters!
I am obsessed with GokuXPiccolo pairings but until I found your story I could not find a single yaoi about these two!! Keep up the great work I can't wait for your next chapter!!

Spiky-haired airfreshener XDD so funny, you write amazingly. Hope that last little bit gets uploaded soon, I keep reading this over and over! Do more fics with these two, you're amazing at it!

Preciousssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss (Ha to Chichi!)
But almost the last chapter?? Snif, I guess it had to end soon..... snif -.-
Continue it!!!!!!

I've been anxiously waiting for an update of this since I first read it, god you got me hooked!! Loved the chapter, the whole... dunno the word for it but what piccolo was going through, simply loved it. I like it when characters go through that. I mighta said it in my other review but your writing is amazing, all the ways you use to describe are genius, I could never think of things that good. I'm so happy with how this is ending, and I'm anxiously waiting for an epilogue which I'm hoping won't take too long. And you'd better write more Goku and Piccolo stuff, thanks to you its now my offical fav DBZ pairing ... actually one of my fav pairings overall. Can't think of the words to say how great this is, seriously. One of my fav fics EVER!

Eeeeek I'm so excited!! I love how you write Piccolo. He's so akward and adorable. It wasn't mushy enought to be OOC I don't think. I can't wait for the epilogue ^.^ Will everyone find out about them?? 0.o

Aw...I really can't wait for the prologue! I'm dying to know how they figure things out and how far they'll go to make it work. Great story. One of the best of this pairing I've ever read.

LATER. ROGUEFURY