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for Oceans

by Salza

schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Have I said that lately? I LOVE this story. Piccolo is so hurt and stoic and confused. And Goku is so wonderfully bull in a china shop straight forward, so sure he can make things work or at least understand why they can't. They are so comfortably awkward with each other I can't help but love them. I want them to work this out and be able to stay together. I think the only one Goku might be concerned about his reaction would be Gohan, but I bet he'd take it best of everyone.
person mgpem
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Oh boy, you really are going to end it in the next chapter? Oh bugger, I really love this story... Could you consider writing some more Piccolo slash? You portray him so well, and on top of that he's in character even in the most peculiar situations. It is not often one finds their fav. character slashed like he should be. Thank you for this story. It has been a blast!
person gabs
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >(
I want Chi-Chi' s head in a stake!!!!!!!!!!!

Please?
person Andrea
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh... Gosh thats so sad!! T-T Darn it it was supposed to be like a happy ending... not a sad one. T-T
person Funky Nassau
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know it's good fiction when it hits you personally and makes you think. Would you believe this made me reevaluate my relationship with a person?

Truly, heart-heartbreakingly beautiful. Incredibly in character, lovingly detailed, and a desperately bitter-sweet ride.

Bravo.
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, my heart is totally broken for them. Update soon! I need to know it'll be ok again!

:}
person gabs
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just read the chapter 9 of Oceans, and it´s beautiful, really. I hope that you continue it soon (and if you take requests I would like to see Piki on the bottom, juajajajaja) .

Bye, see ya!
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the greatest DBZ fic I've read in a LONG time...and here I was going to search for Piccolo/Gohan fics and I stumble across this greatness. I really wish for an update this was amazing!
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear god, this is the best DBZ fic I've ever read D:. Please, update asap!! I must read more *O*. This kept me up till 3am reading when I had to get up at 8 for work haha. So I really do love it, please update :)!!
person ROGUEFURY
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AW! Great chapter. I could feel every emotion and jarring sensation you described. It was excellent. Your writing is magnificent and poignant to me; it makes me go through the motions perfectly and I can't wait for the next update. I hope Piccolo can pull himself together! I love that Namek and hate to see him so hurt =c

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