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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Preciousssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Please continue it!
Dead to Chi-chi (Milk or whathever)!!!!!!!
Please continue it!
Dead to Chi-chi (Milk or whathever)!!!!!!!
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update another chapter since I felt this one was too short;take your time because I know writing is tough.
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! An update!! And I am certainly glad you ensured us this wasn't the end, because if it had been, I'd be sobbing.
Even from Piccolo's POV this was still weighty and angsty. :(
*SQUISH* I hope to see more real soon!!!!
Even from Piccolo's POV this was still weighty and angsty. :(
*SQUISH* I hope to see more real soon!!!!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I'm glad you told us this chapter wasn't the end, because I would have pitched a FIT!! You wrote Piccolo's character so well in this chapter. Well, you do in every chapter, but his emotions were so dead on here. And the way you had Goku realize a little later on that things would be changing; that was great!
I look forward to the next chapter and the newest developments. It'll be interesting to see how these two manage to continue (hopefully) their relationship now.
I look forward to the next chapter and the newest developments. It'll be interesting to see how these two manage to continue (hopefully) their relationship now.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Coollllll,. I Love the way you write Piki, but Goku should have his way too, no?
Jijijiji --gigles--.
Continue it, please! :)
See you
Jijijiji --gigles--.
Continue it, please! :)
See you
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! NOT LANDING! THEIR SEXY VOYAGE OF NUMMINESS AND GREAT BANTER CANNOT END!!! Ah well, I love the depth you put into the Yardrat escapade, and into Piccolo's hidden emotions and such. Can't wait to see what happens next. THEY CANT JUST STOP SEEING EACH OTHER, SO THEY BETTER FIND A WAY TO SNEAK AROUND!!!!!
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squirms* Another wonderful chapter ^.^ I'm a little sad that they're landing soon though! I hope they don't stop...erm... interacting :P This latest lemon was VERY entertaining. I love how Goku reacted, lol!
Excellent writing, as usual!
Excellent writing, as usual!
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So much love for this chapter. All the Piccolo thoughts, and the Yadrats, and how Goku and Piccolo differed in their approach to these aliens.
O.o A little surprised by Goku's reaction to Piccolo's over bearing dominance, but I suspect this is an aspect you'll go into in more detail later.
YAY!!!!!
O.o A little surprised by Goku's reaction to Piccolo's over bearing dominance, but I suspect this is an aspect you'll go into in more detail later.
YAY!!!!!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing and sweet. All I could think to describe this chapter. It really made my day to read it, so I hope you update soon!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this was an amazing chapter. Everything from thought processes to actions. Don't want to ruin it for other folks, so I won't go into details, like you did. :)