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Ah - I don't know how to express how much I like this. They are so wonderfully awkward together, trying to redefine this complicated new relationship. Goku really does love him, doesn't he? And it sounds like he wants Piccolo to feel the same and is trying to cajole him into feeling the same. I like how he takes contol away from Piccolo, tests his limits, proves yet again he can be trusted, then gives up control when he knows Piccolo can't take it anymore. Poor Goku though, with Piccolo's reaction to 'love'.

I just can't get over how well you write. You're truely amazing!

Wonderful chapter, as usual. I loved the interactions, dialoge, and of course, the lemon ^.^ I feel bad for Goku though. He's probably pretty upset about what Piccolo said in the end there. Poor guy :(

I eagerly await the next brilliant chapter from you!

AH! Cliff hanger!!!! :P YAY! This story is back. I like reading what's going on in Piccolo's head, and his thoughts on Son, and what he thinks is going on in the sayian's mind.

Only to watch as he slowly comes to realize...Goku isn't quite as dense as he leads others to believe he is. *smirks*

I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter, and the bit of pay back that is coming Piccolo's way! :D

ONCE AGAIN, A deliciously sexy and witty chapter! I can't wait for an update; need to see how devilish Goku can be, having Piccolo in such a nice spot XD

Oh, you are SO good at what you do!! I absolutely LOVE the dialoge between Goku and Piccolo. You keep them both in character so well too. Goku isn't as stupid as everyone protrays him, and the wit you've portrayed him with in this fic is just perfect! The interaction between the two is exactly how I'd imagined it would be. Piccolo tends to be more dominant by nature, but Goku gets his kicks in too and doesn't just fold; but at the same time, he lets Piccolo take the reigns.... he just makes sure he tugs back sometimes, lol!

I'm so glad you updated. I was just thinking about this fic yesterday and wondering when the next chapter would be out to enjoy. It was very enjoyable indeed and I can hardly wait for the next! Excellent work!

*adds sporking to Bullkitties*


SPORK

Alright, you. You've had your chance.

*SPORK!*

Wow, this story is amazingly emotional. The vocabulary is so diverse as well! Good choice deciding to use Piccolo's stand-point on things as well, Goku logic really is too simple. XD But most importantly... the sex scene (AND the buildup!) was HOT. Thought I'd include that since I've seen a few fics in my time that are beautifully written and then the author gets too nervous writing one of the best parts, fudging up one of the best parts. *shakes her head sadly* Happens to the best of us i suppose.

Now... where did that spork go...?

I don't generally go for them as a pair, but this was wonderfully done! I esp laughed at the ch 4 line “Just guessing, but I don’t think you’d want these in you.”
*shrugs* What can I say? Pic's talones are not used much in FF, and guess I'm just glade someone finally remembered that he has'em, his fangs too. Great read for a GokuxPic!

Oh wow. I usually would not read this pairing, but I am so glad that I did!

Your writing is superb and elegant. I love how you portray Goku and Piccolo. They are very much still in character, and I like how Piccolo's thoughts are sometimes sarcastic and comedic.

I think it's so cute that in their love scene, that it is full of passion, and not as explicit as other fanfiction.

Keep up the wonderful work, and I can't wait for an update. I want to see how their relationship deepens, and if anyone ever finds out.

Great job!