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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goooood story.
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this was another exquisitely written chapter! So believable and it made me feel warm and cheery inside XD Most smut makes me happy, but this makes me cheery XD I can't wait for the next chapter. Piccolo is so great and I wanna see how you develop this relationship.
LATER. ROGUEFURY
LATER. ROGUEFURY
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Squee!!! What a cute chapter! This isn't the end, is it? I hope not, because I'm itching for more! I always come here looking for updates from you :)
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An update. :) I like the fact they got this talk out of the way. I am hoping Goku's plan will work...but I know, if it worked out the way it was planned, there'd hardly be a story. :P
I can't wait for the next update!
I can't wait for the next update!
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Goku-logic - so simple, so effortless, and making such perfect sense. Goku-logic gives you everything you want. It's like a gentle flood that takes you whereever it wants, and having arrived proceeds to convince you that wherever you end up is exactly where you wanted to be the entire time. Piccolo doesn't stand a chance. *g* A fun chapter to read.
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful in that so good i'm now late for class way
thanks for the ride
bye
thanks for the ride
bye
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg omg I loved it I loved i tI loved it
You didnt go into detail in... Those areas like other writers do
but you carefully described how it felt and what it was like
Kudos for you... and more yaoi for me!
You didnt go into detail in... Those areas like other writers do
but you carefully described how it felt and what it was like
Kudos for you... and more yaoi for me!
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"fragmented faster than the Soviet Union after the Cold War"
That's got to be one of the best line I've ever read!
Oh, and rest of the story great too ^^ More?
That's got to be one of the best line I've ever read!
Oh, and rest of the story great too ^^ More?
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To Macha - many thanks ^^() Sometimes I DO need sporking.
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow....*is a useless pool of drool*....
Okay, I'll try. I like how most of Piccolo's thoughts on the matter were anylitical and when they weren't how it seemed he had just stopped thinking for that time.
I've seen several references in this chapter to how things later are not 'okay' and of course, that leaves me wanting to know what you have in store for these two.
WELL DONE!
Okay, I'll try. I like how most of Piccolo's thoughts on the matter were anylitical and when they weren't how it seemed he had just stopped thinking for that time.
I've seen several references in this chapter to how things later are not 'okay' and of course, that leaves me wanting to know what you have in store for these two.
WELL DONE!