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sooo angry right now. *takes deep breaths* i'm so annoyed with ALL OF THEM!!! well except, little ed, the poor victim in this whole mess. Ah well it seems phase 2 is a go *squares shoulders and waits for the disaster*

arghh...must kill Jenny.. must tie and gag Speed... must smack both Ed and Roy up the back side of the head! (or lock them in a room with no clothes) oh yeah.. much better idea!

Oh dear, everyone is so confused.

I hope the next chapter will clear some things between Ed and Roy, because it's so messed up now...

But like always - Great work! This story is more interesting with every next chapter! Keep that up! ^_^

Woo! Me likey this chapter, Roy's suffering... Heh... Nice, and I hope you update soon! :3

Damn! Angst and misery abound! Looks like everybody in Central's having a bad night. I'd pay money to see Winry smack Jenny upside the head with that wrench of hers! grr! Roy needed to get his ass chewed out. Too bad all that fussing out accomplished was making him turn to the bottle. Maybe getting snockered and suffering a totally hellish hangover will do him some good. There's not much he can do to get himself out of the shit he's in. It's not like Ed would listen to anything he had to say anyway. Maybe Winry can help get them back together. *sigh* so sad. What is Ed supposed to do when he become a member of the Ouroboros? What's his role in the organization? I think Greed said something about him being in control of the streets but I'm not too clear on this part. What does that mean really and how does it relate to street racing? Whatever it is, it will surely make things go from bad to worse for poor Ed.
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

i won't injury you, but could i kill jenny? why doesn't roy just tell her that she is a booty call? now roy is going to go though to get ed to talk to him again

Oh, my God! How I hate Jenny! But please Roy has to go after Ed! He has to swallow his pride just this onece. But I'm not sure he actually can.:(

O,O omg thats soo cruel....poor ed, and jenny is a bitch! >,< speed is an ass too for helping her!. whats going to happen to ed and the mafia sins? I can't wait to see what you have planed, it great fic! ^_^ the thing about anime was funny and I hope roy feel bad when he finds out about ed being envy's half brother after all those things he said, its not ed's fault that his bastard father was a mafia boss and got his family mixed up in it but I can't say i'm not iching to see ed use soem of the power he's got behind him for being who he is. by the way I like the title its cool, like the T.A.T.U Cd and the racing thing. its a cool concept behind the fic and I hope to read more soon ^_^

Poor Ed, it was rather a mean thing to do.
Stupid bitc...I mean Jenny, I hate her. But Roy isn't the innocent here! He's an ass!
I hope Ed will show him his 'payment'.
And what about Alchemist? And his half-brother, maybe they could have to do something with Ed's situation now, maybe he will leave Roy and start being one of them...but it's up to you to decide.
Update it soon, Thoughts like 'what will happen next' are really killing me alive.