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for Flame and Fullmetal 300 km/h

by Niia

person Pauline
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dunno how many times I will repeat it but I LOVE THIS FIC! ! ! ! ! You're briliant!
It's the best story ever! And I wouldn't mind if you updated it any time soon!
person michelle
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! my favorite part was when roy was worried about his car being pink with bunnies. and i like winry in this story, which says something because i hate her. i'm surpriesed she hasn't told roy to buy a ring and propose already XD
person Silver4HENTAI
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alien:
*stuffs nose to hide nosebleed* OMFG this was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo overdue. well probably not that much but close enough. Man, i mean *pull out more tissue to block nose* yeah.

I mean, my morning sucked but this made my day. I hope to see more of this soon. (like in updates you know>*hint hint*) Its nice to see thier relationship moving along and i cant wait to see them in the future. Oh, and Ed was reading along with me. I haven't seen him yet cause he dragged Roy off to my room.

I hope they dont soil anything I need to sleep in there >_< Oh well... hold on *pulls out more tissue and replaces previous* yeah like, i need to reread that, and the two in my room aren't helping. I thought Eddie was mad with Roy but apparently things like this update can do wonders. ^^
Oh well, eddie said to say hi...(I have to say it for him cause he's busy) Any wahys, bai and update soon. Hope your recovery went/is going along well
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot little scene. Sorry I haven't reviewed until now. I hadn't seen fast and furious, and it takes me a while to get into AU, but you've done a nice job with this one.
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, together! And the ocean was neat too, waves are fun.
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lime?!? Baby, that was one hot lemon if I ever saw one! w00t! :D It's about time these two stopped dancing around each other and got down to business! ;) There was just one thing wrong with it tho. Roy, in his haste to have Ed, didn't prep Ed before taking him. Ya gotta stretch it before ya tap it! ouch! :) Ed was being a bit of a tease by seeing if Roy would chase after him when he just up and left like that. That's Ed tho. Always testing the boundaries and seeing what he can get away with especially if it keeps Roy slightly off balance and not in control! :) I just hope they can keep their new found relationship going when they find out each other's secrets. With Ed being an Ouroboros and Roy's dislike of them on top of whatever else it is that Roy's done in the past they've got a lot between them that could tear them apart. I hope not. They're so good together!! :)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I will submit a suitable review once i get this nose bleed under control. Dear lord!!!!!!!
person Blissful Ignorance
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am SO sorry I haven't reviewed in a while O.O Wah, loved this chapter... That was not a lime, that was a total lemon if I ever saw one XD Hope you update soon! And... Oh noes, Edward's such a little tease :3
person Pip
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. (^^,) I'm really glad you update frequently--it gives me something to look forward to. (~.^) I like that Roy's getting hints of something more than lust when he's around Ed. (^^,) And vice-versa. Looking forward to the next chapter! (~.^)
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HI!! I'm your newest reader!! yay!! I just love this AU world you've created! I've been wondering how Ed got the nickname of Fullmetal since he doesn't have prosthetics in this story and I've decided he had to have gotten it from having nerves (or balls! LOL!) of steel for doing all the crazy stunts he does while racing! OMG! He's awesome! totally fearless! The action between Roy and Ed is just the best. It's not all graphic and vulgar wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am but it's also not for the timid. :) It's just the right balance of sexy and sensual with just a touch of romance. I love it! Ed and Roy both want each other so bad but just won't admit it. *sigh* They're such idiots. I coulda killed Envy for that shit he pulled making Roy say all those things about the Ouroboros and indirectly hurting Ed. bastard! The beach scene was awesome! Maybe a little sump'n sump'n will happen once Roy and Ed get to Roy's place! ;)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
P.S. I really like Winry's character too! I really wish that something REALLY bad would happen to that damned Jenny bitch. God I can't stand her! grr!!

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