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for Flame and Fullmetal 300 km/h

by Niia

person nastyscarythingunderthebed
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, almost! lol. Whoo1 I guessed right on something! And Double Whoo! More Wrath!!! -loves you-

Envy won't be to happy with the way things are proggressing between Roy and Ed! I loved this chapter because it was sweet without being sappy or OOC. not many people can pull that off...

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! <3
person kuragari75
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*still laughing* wow, yeah that would embarass me too. AL really knows how to put someone on the spot, huh? lol, nice chapter! loved it! keep it up, as always, and I can't wait for another update!!! later!
person cm34
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think im about as frustrated as roy is
person cm34
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
authors shouldnt add them selves to a story but should add guy action and less girl when its yaoi good luck on your next stints this one so far leaves me wanting
person cm34
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
contact once again made
person cm34
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all in all you did pretty good but you danced around the subject instead of actually dealing with it good luck on the next .
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! That's painful. And I eagerly await the next installment.
person nastyscarythingunderthebed
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
......Damn Envy....and Poor Roy has no idea what he has just said....I do like Speed too, even though I get the feeling he's not really supposed to be a good guy in this ^^;; Well, either way, Ed is pulling himself deeper and deeper into this and Envy is obviously not going to make this easy on him....

It's too bad you won't be able to update for a few days...I really can't wait to see what happens next! -bounces eagerly-
person nastyscarythingunderthebed
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
p.s: Yay!! More Wrath!!!!! <3
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
On you authors home page you said that you had written some story's .For me 300 km/h is by far one on the best fanfics i have read ( And man do i read everything i can!!!) If you do have other story's , its a shame your not posting them . I know it might be a personal reason not to do so. Since ive never written anything before im not to sure what amount of work is involved in this . If you do , ill be one of the first reading them , i promise. Ok, now on to this current fic...i have to point out just a little injustice ... almost everyone and there uncle are getting some ( to a variable degree as per the character)...but poor lil Winry aint gettin no action...maybe a friend might be in order, or not. Anyhooooo, cant wait for your next update. Lâche pas la patate he he he , yours truly Fleur_de_lys

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