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Alien:I am soooooo sorry, I didn't mean my last review as flame like...*sniffle* blame Ed and Roy for being with you for so long. Thay don't even call to say hi...I love the update but you didnt answer...can i hit jenny with my car? please? I dont like her...and eddies playing hard to get. when will he learn, play with fire an you'll get burn. and the pool scene was hot, I MUST compliment you on it.*dies in pool of drool that had formed over keyboard* oh and you called eddie a 'her' again.*Ed rolled ?her? eyes*

:X nice. lol. WRATH! (my thrid favorite ^^;;) -insert exceedingly praisful stuff here since I am to tired to think of a coherent reveiw ;_;- I can't wait to see what happens next! (I swear i will write you a better reveiw next time!)

Dun Dun Dun!!!! Damn, that bitch needs to just die already -_-;; lmao. Great chapter! I can't wait to see the next one!! :D It's cool that Ed got Greed's respect, since he is my all time favorite homoculouse in the show....he and Lust, anyway XD (hooray!)

I'm ALSO glad that this chapter came out earlier than intended! You have my utmost gratitude!

Keep up the good work! <3

Again, that heat and tension between them is excellent! But argh, Roy's stupid girl needs to step the fuck off >:E

Milles fois bravo, it's rare to get an author that can make there story so addictive without any superfluous fillers ( yes , anything containing citrus). Not that i dont enjoy those, id be a hypocrite if i denied it . I am aware that your story does have some light lemons in it , but it's mostly sexy and erotic, not blatantly pornographic . Your story is a refreshing addition to EdxRoy fanfics everywhere. Oh , just one question , does jenny get cement shoes for x-mas , if so id like to contribute to the gift....;)......keep going with this story , it's more then worth it. Oh , sorry im rambling, but a gold star to you for updating so damn fast!!!!! i love it. Fleur de lys

ooooo, plot thickens!!! and yay! he made it! nice chapter!

I like how you're getting more tension between the two of them, yowza! There's some heat there. I like Psiren too, she's damn sexy, unlike Jenny. The one thing I'll note though, maybe instead of the last OC Speed, would it make more sense to involve more FMA characters somehow? Archer canonically hated Roy. Or is Speed Archer? Oh ho...

Alien:WAAAAAHHHHH! HOW COME YOU DANCED WITH EDDIE AND NOT ME?????? *sniffles and puts in a corner* no fair.....*sniffle*..On a brighter note, a jelous Ed is an adorable ed...and Is it me or did Roy get kinda annoyed when he found Speed with Ed? He was sounding like how Scar did when he was warning Ed about Roy. Oh well and did I mention I love the updates they ar hot so I dont have to send Hughes *huggles hughes who starts talking about how cute elisia is* Oh and i dont like jenny...can I hit her with my car? though I can't promise to be under the driving limit if i do....oh and I noticed an error somewhere but I cant remember where...oh well, hope you get better and update soon...

What a bag. Ed/Roy just can't seem to get organized and figure out what they want, can they?

you should have stuck with the kiss scene