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Hahahah! I loved it! Especialy the ending line. it was cute....so, does Speed play a larger part in the story? And does this mean that Ed has Greed's approval becasue not only of what he said but also because he stepped in when Kimblee pulled out a gun?

I can't wait to find out what else happens!

GO ED!! GO!!! *bites nails* He makes it right!! oi, I hate cliff hangers... but they are fun to write huh? ;) anyway, nice job at making a 'bad guy' character. I see your point. I was just letting you know it was working xD. I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter!!! later!

ok, somebody f***ing slap Jenny please!!!!! GAH! nice with the whole door thing btw, really lovin' the story! keep it up!!

Kimblee has such a big mouth.

Ahhhh cliffhanger! D: Noooo what's going to happen?!

He's going to jump? Awsome! I hope he makes in across instead of in the water (but of course, he will make it because if he dies we would have no more sotry, right?) I'm glad you finaly updated, but i hope you are alright and weren't hurt in your accedent. ;_;

Keep up the goos work please, and keep safe!

I'm so sorry to hear you got hurt! I hope you feel better soon! I have to say though, I loved this chapter! You're very good at writting the race seens.

Alien: Bad roy..you should do like me and blackmail him into doing the stuff you want, I mean thats like the only way...well there are other ways but I should leave it up to Ed in the bedroom. The fighting thin well what else to expect? Ohh...love the update and tell eddie happy birthday for me... knowing Roy aint gonna do it, I mean how could he miss his own infatuations birthday (though I have to agree with ed on the entire thing about birthdays jus a reminder were getting older) oh...I wonder if you like chocolate..if you dont what do you like? a ed plushie? roy plushie? hughes plushie? *hands out all three in attempt to get author to update faster* bai and update or i'll send hughes-chan to... be all hughes-ishie to you. ^^ UPDATE!!!

*L* wet Ed is the best. Of course denying everything isn't very nice, Roy.

Poor Ed and Roy ^^;; They know absolutly nothing about eachother or what they are getting into, do they...especialy Roy....

I love how you made Scar on this one, since he is like, one of my all time favorite characters :) And Al too

Wonderful chapter!!! I can't wait to see what you come out with next! the bathroom sceen had me laughing my ass off!

Keep up the excelent work!